well this is certainly a..different fic..see i could definetly see percy doing such a thing as this..however having a bit harder time selling me on oliver. but it's coming slowly i do hope you continue it seems like it's been awhile since you posted

Cute fic! but.. WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO FINISH IT? pls continue it!

ANOTHER CHAPTER!

You need to check that you have whole words in some places.

Something about the title of your last chapter "Giving in to Temptations"...it was a little bit like "Giving Lady Feylene False Hope" *snigger* Ah, there should be an Oliver/Percy shipper site, if anyone came across one please e-mail me!

I like what happened. PWPs are yummy but I just get a tad annoy at how virgin Percy could give at the drop of a hat, it's just not real.

I think this is really close to a PWP, it seems this fic is written for pure shipper purpose. Oliver stripping Percy...*drool*, inviting him over... oh well, me like.

This is short.

I like how sweet Oliver is being, but this tale is a tad confusing.

How old are they right now? Need more history.

Poor clueless Percy.

Why did you put THE END at Chapter One? Changed your mind? And what happened to his job at the ministry?

Ah...Oliver stripping and dressing blushing Percy, now thats an imagery. I understand why Oliver want Percy out of Priscilla's clothes.

So I am no Miss Universe,

But I love myself as myself.

I know this sounds stupid,

But I just don't quite get why…

Hair dyes are the rage -

A became B to find B became A.

Don't know what you are,

But you rock more than you think.

Don't know where you heard,

You as you is plain.

But if plain is you than know,

I'll be in love with plain!

See, Percy is sexy in a Percy way. There was a Madmag comic where a woman who wants to become an actress got a plastic surgery, number 3 nose, number 5 cheeks, and number 7 jaw. She went to the studio to discover that sitting there is a bunch of other ID 3-5-7 women...

_ WOW! Perce in drag? You're sooo way out! But that's what makes this fic hot! OLIVER AND PERCY RULES! Their my favorite couple in Harry Potter! Dunno why! Can you write more of them? LUV THIS FIC! Angsty!

I honestly don't understand why this is a Harry Potter fanfic. It would work a lot better if you had original characters, or basic writing skills.

Squee! *bounces* Poor Perce, he is an innocent. - I love that last paragraph. More please! -