|Reviews for Returning Home|
| TheShamelessFanGirl 6/27/11 . chapter 10
I just got done reading your story and loved it. Good job! Also, thank you for making this Alex/Ray story. I know so many people like Alex/Hunter but I could never see it I thought the one who knew her best and would love her no matter if she had the powers or not would always be Ray. He has been with her through the good and the bad and who else would be better suited for her but him? So thanks again!
| FaithInEveryone 7/7/10 . chapter 10
Ok, I wasn't happy with the Alex - Ray situation at first, but I love the ending :'D It's so beautiful and I'm a sucker for happy endings :)
I loved the entire story btw :)
| FaithInEveryone 7/7/10 . chapter 2
I'm getting to like your story.
Alex is older, but she's still the same and I like it :)
Plus, I like her new powers, like morphing into someone else.
Although, I don't like the Alex - Ray love thing,
because it's awkard to know that they like eachother differently, I'm not used to it. :S
But, still, good story :)
| Jeremy Shane 5/28/10 . chapter 10
| Jeremy Shane 5/27/10 . chapter 9
| Maetch 5/25/10 . chapter 10
Well, it was an interesting story, though I'm not too crazy about Alex and Ray tying the knot. Technically, their relationship was always that of near-siblings, so it's weird that they would go all lovey-dovey.
Still, I think you should continue with your sequels. I imagine things are going to escalate further for Alex. Personally, I'm curious if a certain ex-CEO is going to be lurking in Alex's life again real soon.
| JAke 5/22/10 . chapter 10
dude this is bad ass work good job
| Replica Velocity a.k.a. X5 714 5/21/10 . chapter 10
It was a very cool story.
| Hunter 5/21/10 . chapter 9
very well written nightwatcher... excellent action sequence... and i feel sorry for anyone that crosses Alex.
| Replica Velocity a.k.a. X5 714 5/19/10 . chapter 9
God, why are people like that. You really showed a good image of Alex if pushed too far, good chapter.
| Replica Velocity a.k.a. X5 714 5/2/10 . chapter 8
Wow... great fic- and I love what you've done so far. You have really done the childhood to adult really well.
| Jeremy Shane 3/28/10 . chapter 8
good chapter & more please
| Gold Standard 3/24/10 . chapter 2
It's great story thus so far. It makes me think of 13 going on 30 imagining Alex and Ray as early teenagers now into their adulthood. Looking forward to see how the story unfolds.
| Jeremy Shane 1/24/10 . chapter 7
good chapter & more please
| Krydor 1/23/10 . chapter 7
You keep writing about Alex getting ready for and after a shower, and pretty soon I'm going to need a cigarette and a cold shower myself after reading your chapters, heh.
Can't wait for chapter 8!