|Reviews for With Much Gratitude|
| Mrs.Phineas Bogg 1/4/10 . chapter 1
I don't think you have to go any further with the story. It says so much on its own. It's a slice of Linderman's life. Again, I can truly see the actions taking place, its like another missing scene, or watching a final scene or sequel. You truly know how to bring Ricky, Clifford and any other characters you write to life again. I can just see the boys on the stoop, having this conversation, that green jacket, the soda can and cig. You have a good knack for using 'props' to further the action.
You're right, they never did say the brother's name, so it's cool that you didn't make one up here.