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wow, what an interesting fic. there were a couple of grammar mistakes, but nothing too major. great job!

oh wow. Really nice

This was an excellent fic. I loved the introspective view point and the fact that he fell for Light even knowing they would be enemies.

Thanks

Calia

This is my first time ever reading Death Note Fanfiction. I like it so far.

I have been reading some of your Harry Potter fanfics and I think that you are a good writer.

Keep going please!

Hey welcome back!, checking your page everyday finally paid off your back! hope everythings okay, or as close to ok as they can be xx

im so glad you're back to writing! i read the story but i dont really understand it. haha. not your fault though. i dont watch death note, thats why... still, im sure it's a great story. lol.

Whoo, L is getting a bit bothered watching Light!

People know that love would or could hurt them, but in L's case it would kill him because of who he was and his love.

I enjoyed reading this, good work.

Good so far, but, his father is the chief of police, not a private investigator. Also found one small error. "best in the Japan"

Glad to have you back and what a wonderful story this is!

I'm a huge fan of Death Note and this one-shot of yours was perfect. I really liked how you described L' thought about Light. Great story!

Poor L.. If you see L as a socially inhibted genius who doesn't interact often with other people face to face and is removed from the world by his work, observing the world through a pane of glass (laptop or otherwise), then it is really tragic that his fascination, his interest was caught by the one person he met that was able to match him, pace for pace, and was still so very different from him that he could not help but be drawn like a moth to a flame. And in the end, he was consumed by it. It always made me feel sad that L had to die like this, and that we did not get to know him very well. He remained in the shadows even in death. No one will remember him, because no one knew him (and those who did, like Watari, cannot tell anyone), and "L" can always be replaced. I wonder how he felt about that? That he was replaceable? I feel like I want to know him even more.

Please, please, continue this story through the entire plot! I loved it!

Wow! This is fucking genius Yuki! You did an awesome job on this. Love!

OMG!

This was awesome specially since i've been watching Death note for the past two days (in fact i was gonna watch it now) always thinking about this pair!

Gosh...this was awesome! and i am so friggin' happy you are back! you are amazing!

Cookies Miss Mandy!

Have a great weekend!

Belle

Awsome Begning D your an amazing writer. I cant wait to read more of this story