That left a raw, tug-at-your-heartstrings kind of feeling. You portrayed Dot's emotions extremely well as well as the sincere but careful movements others have around her.

Awesome, simply awesome! I can't believe you don't have more reviews for this.
A great portrayal of how Dot felt. Great job! _

That was so depressing! I'm so depressed now! Poor Bob, he doesn't understand, he never will, how much Dot loves him, how much she wanted him, wanted him back. Your writing was excellent-you should write novels. I could feel the pain and anguish of Dot, I cound really understand her feelings and emotions. It'd be so interesting if you could do a chapter from Bob's point of view...hurt, angry, depressed, wondering about relationshi with Dot, love, and maybe a sliver of understanding for her.

Way to go to capture the feeling of Dot after her 'wedding.' I like the darker fics myself, they explore something that isn't done in the cartoon. I can see why you were nominated for this story.

My god, you write a lot of fic. :) I wish i had the time and dilegence to do this. Cheers for ya. :)

FD

Real good, the emotion is so strong here.

I really liked it... it's a nice spin-off of the actual episode! Write some more please! :)

That was amazing... Beautiful... *mushy squish*