I can't say a word. I can say three: BEST. FANFICTION. EVER. This has to be the best short story I've ever read. Don't believe me? When I'm giving reviews I'm normally strict and mean. (I'm only trying to help!) but after I read this I laughed so loud my younger brother cried. YOU ARE BEST PONY!

Yup that video brock posted would have lots of hits. XD!

lol i loved the end

hahahahahahahahah you have to love Brock and every one else

The ending made me die of laughter. Although, if my friend did that to me...he'd be dead. Loved it!

Not cheesy at all. A very enjoying story funny how brock was recording them. Ha ha. Oh random brock hes just too funny when he randomly does something unexpected.

Nice story. While I was reading I didn't see many grammer mistakes. Honestly this isn't your number 1# story but it's high up there and I enjoyed reading it. Good luck with future storys to come :)

By the way, whats the video Brock posted called? Or did Dawn and Ash destroy the camera before he got to a computer?

ha ha ha This is defiantly going on youtube!" He chuckled. "It's going to be a hit!" love it

Lol brocks creepin them. Anywho great fic and great ending

haha best ending ever

you can't kill ikarishipping

HAHAHA I love this. Especially the ending. Pearlshipping forever!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. This is goin on youtube. LOL. Dawn and Ash are so CUTE together.

HAHA, THEIR BUSTED!

Excellent! Excellent! Excellent!

Is the only way I can describe it. :)

PearlShipping FTW! :D