|Reviews for That Time of Day|
| lilianyas 4/24/10 . chapter 1
That was so cute! Loved it!
| urmylyfnw 3/5/10 . chapter 1
wow, this was really good. will you continue it, or extend it at all? i'm interested in what will happen, how he knew her, and what made her so shy...
| vampgirl1991 3/4/10 . chapter 2
hey i know this was just a one shot for a contest and all.. but i think you should really consider turing it into a story.. i think it could be good! lol but thats just me.. you dont have to listen.
neway.. loved it. i thought it was very cute!
| anon 1/23/10 . chapter 1
aww, please continue this! it reminded me of something Nicholas sparks would wriite, except better. I'm sure this can be blamed upon the beach setting and the fact that I have yet to read a book about him that isn't disappointing, but it's also because you're really good! and I see a cute story outta this!
please continue, i'm sure you'll gain a nice following, including me! )
| VanPireNZ 1/12/10 . chapter 1
This was such a well written, sweet little story that I you will continue. It just sets up the perfect story of two people meeting.
Good luck on the comp.
| freakyemogoth 1/12/10 . chapter 1
This was great and i totally think it could become into a bigger story. I would read it.
| calin-durus 1/11/10 . chapter 1
aww that was short and sweet! I liked it bb, let me know when the voting starts!
| hexumhunnie311 1/10/10 . chapter 1
Aw! This was adorable. And nice touch having Jake be the name of The Lab. Good luck in the contest!
| Mikersindahawz 1/9/10 . chapter 1
That was a really quick ending. this one shot deserves more than a thousand words :)
| iciri-piciri 1/8/10 . chapter 1
OMG lol :D Hey Amber... I haven'T read it all, i just had to start my review now.. so:
Lol because of the pic, I really thought this was Epov.
ok, maybe I should have realised earlier, but this sentence made me all o.O :D :D "It was breathtaking, beautiful and rugged. I smirked as I realized that description also fit my latest obsession; my beach guy." LOL I was like WHAT? er.. Ohh yeah *facepalm* :D
OMFG! “Jake?” - hilarious :D :D
aw ok, I finished :) sweet :)
love you bb :)
ps: so so so so sorry (and no I'm not stuttering ;) ) for not reading it earlier, I've been crazy busy lately :)
| Scorpio11 1/8/10 . chapter 1
God, what a hoot. "Sit." What a charming story.
| Rosmarina 1/7/10 . chapter 1
Cute. :) This moment made me chuckle: “Sit.” He said quietly and I did.
| SubtlePen 1/7/10 . chapter 1
this was really sweet! could be a great beginning to a longer fic!
| Angelenna 1/5/10 . chapter 1
I loved this! I had read this and thought it was wonderful, and I think that after the contest is over, you might want to continue it. It kept a smile on my face the whole time. Thanks for writing it!
| MrsRThomasP 1/5/10 . chapter 1
This is good, and quite sweet, I really think you should extend it to a full story.