That was so cute! Loved it!

wow, this was really good. will you continue it, or extend it at all? i'm interested in what will happen, how he knew her, and what made her so shy...

hey i know this was just a one shot for a contest and all.. but i think you should really consider turing it into a story.. i think it could be good! lol but thats just me.. you dont have to listen.

neway.. loved it. i thought it was very cute!

-meg

aww, please continue this! it reminded me of something Nicholas sparks would wriite, except better. I'm sure this can be blamed upon the beach setting and the fact that I have yet to read a book about him that isn't disappointing, but it's also because you're really good! and I see a cute story outta this!

please continue, i'm sure you'll gain a nice following, including me! )

This was such a well written, sweet little story that I you will continue. It just sets up the perfect story of two people meeting.

Good luck on the comp.

xoxo

This was great and i totally think it could become into a bigger story. I would read it.

aww that was short and sweet! I liked it bb, let me know when the voting starts!

Aw! This was adorable. And nice touch having Jake be the name of The Lab. Good luck in the contest!

That was a really quick ending. this one shot deserves more than a thousand words :)

OMG lol :D Hey Amber... I haven'T read it all, i just had to start my review now.. so:

Lol because of the pic, I really thought this was Epov.

ok, maybe I should have realised earlier, but this sentence made me all o.O :D :D "It was breathtaking, beautiful and rugged. I smirked as I realized that description also fit my latest obsession; my beach guy." LOL I was like WHAT? er.. Ohh yeah *facepalm* :D

OMFG! “Jake?” - hilarious :D :D

aw ok, I finished :) sweet :)

love you bb :)

Olivia

ps: so so so so sorry (and no I'm not stuttering ;) ) for not reading it earlier, I've been crazy busy lately :)

God, what a hoot. "Sit." What a charming story.

Cute. :) This moment made me chuckle: “Sit.” He said quietly and I did.

this was really sweet! could be a great beginning to a longer fic!

I loved this! I had read this and thought it was wonderful, and I think that after the contest is over, you might want to continue it. It kept a smile on my face the whole time. Thanks for writing it!

This is good, and quite sweet, I really think you should extend it to a full story.