Interesting idea, Percy talking to a pet. It seems like something he would do... I can imgaine him talking to Scabbers in that same way, but in a much younger sense, not really aware of the 'social dance' as you so eloquently put it... hm. Maybe you should write something like that, too.

Once again I find myself reviewing your once again I find myself with nothing but praise(well Praise is a good thing so..:)U love how you made Percy once again. He says he's selfish because he's afraid of being broken so he keeps his owl in his is he really or is he just so ... I'm rammbling and that does not help matters so I'll just discontinue the before statment. and just say I loved this fic and leave it at that. Thanks again.

Wow. I am throughly impressed. I really like this...dammit, I had this whole thing planned out to say about this fic, and then I forgot everything I wanted to say. I guess thats what happens when one is so impressed with a something, such as this fic.

Anyway. Awesome. I love all your work, you are a truely fantastic writer.

Thought-provoking... I liked it.

Ah, you literally made me cry... ::cuddles Percy:: Beautiful writing, and so intense.

::claps:: This is so pretty. I didn't know Percy was like me- in fact I hated him before I realized he was so hot in the movie.

Poor Percy... Nice look at his more pensive, melancholic side. He's so clinical about his own feelings of isolation, too, which I think fits in well with his more public persona.

This was truly good. I can absolutely see Percy like that, in fact, that *is* how I see Percy. Tired of pretending, the agoraphobia closing in, just wanting to be himself and be alone. *sighs* Very well done. _

That's really good...poor Percy...I like the idea of him only feeling comfortable around Hermes...well done!