| Reviews for Twilight Twenty Five: Spero |
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Jill 11/3/12 . chapter 25 Another lovely fic. I'm considering leaving my husband for you :) |
AnkleDeep 5/12/10 . chapter 17 These are fantastic! It gives a great insight into the characters and their inner feelings. *spins in spinny chair* Very well done! |
Legna989 4/19/10 . chapter 25Bound is better. What a fantastic line, and what a spectacular way to close out this fascinating exploration of Carlisle. Thank you for writing. |
Legna989 4/19/10 . chapter 24I really like the dichotomy presented here between "followers" and "family." Very nice. Thank you for writing. |
Legna989 4/19/10 . chapter 23I know that so many Twilight readers hate Renesmee, or the concept of Renesmee, or both, but I don't. Despite the fact that SM's abysmal attempts to explain the science of it drive me to absolute distraction, I think it's the magic of Renesmee that appeals to me. You capture that sentiment perfectly here, particularly with this line: "There was no way to look into this baby's face and not see something greater than myself, and listening to her little heart beat, I knew without doubt, she had a soul." She might be unique, one of only a few like her, but her existence also reflects the miracle in any child-living evidence of love. Thank you for writing. |
LikeToRead22 4/5/10 . chapter 25Congratulations on finishing! I enjoyed reading all of your drabbles & chapters. I'm going to guess Comfort was the one that was ghost written. But, it was tough to pick out. I had some close runners-up. I really enjoyed the chapter with Edward and Carlisle and Renesmee. I liked the way you portrayed Edward in that - very mature for a 17 year old, self-deprecating vampire. ;-) Thanks for writing! |
Lady Dragona 4/4/10 . chapter 25Amazing. I love how you tied this all together by being tird together with the love of a family. Beautifully done. You did it. I have no clue which one was ghost written. Someone is good at immitating you. |
ElleCC 4/2/10 . chapter 23SO sweet. Aww. How an unchanging world can change so quickly, huh? Nice look at Edward as a dad :) |
beignet 4/1/10 . chapter 25bound truly is better. Hooray you did an amazing job with the prompts. I loved the snippets of insight into Carlisle's life. I say chapter 21 or 23 was ghost written if for no reason than it wasn't solely about Carlisle. I will miss these updates. They gave me a short escape & breather before diving back into the real world. |
shasta53 4/1/10 . chapter 25Thank you so much for these! They were all wonderful and I enjoyed spending some time with Carlisle too! |
b3j02 4/1/10 . chapter 25I have no idea which one what Ghost written but I did put in my guess a few entries back. You did a wonderful job with the Carlisle centered prompts! Congrats on finishing! |
hippogriff-tamer 4/1/10 . chapter 25Ah, Carlisle is a true family man...thanks for sharing these fabulous moments with him and the others..I'm going to miss them... HT |
LibraryLady08 4/1/10 . chapter 25Thanks for writing. Excellent as always. :) -MJ |
Aspenleaf 4/1/10 . chapter 25Of all of them Carlisle would know. I couldn't imagine spending as long as he did alone. Beautifully done! |
ElleCC 4/1/10 . chapter 14This was lovely :) Excellent portrayal of Jasper and Carlisle. I always love glimpses of "Jasper and Alice find the Cullens" and how it goes down, because I think that Jasper's reaction to all of them, plus their reactions to him (mostly Carlisle's, really), are all so interesting. I have to imagine that in any sane vampire, the sight of Jasper (mostly his scars) would cause some instinctive defensive reactions. Which of course he would feel. I can see it becoming this big vicious cycle. I really like how you showed it. "But there is no other vampire like Carlisle Cullen. No coven like this one." How true :) "I'm not like Edward. I don't beat myself up for my mistakes, and I can't say that I have the same level of remorse for my actions that he does, either. I'm a survivor. I did what I had to do. I still do." Exactly. Thank you! This was lovely ) Thank you! |