|Reviews for Coalition|
| Uzumaki111 1/20/13 . chapter 1
I read everything...in one day. It was a day well spent. This was superb. Good work.
| Lil DragonLex 12/6/11 . chapter 17
I love this. Though I did wish to see more of the Bat family and their awesomeness working with the JL towards rescuing Batman or really Gotham. The humor was great. And I liked how you portrayed Catman and the Riddler to help them somewhat. Really good. Great job!
| Gotham's Siren 11/9/11 . chapter 17
Loved your story :D I've read it about 5 tones all the way through...man you are one descriptive author. Is there any way you can explain the ending though? I don't get it Dx
| bat-with-butterfly-wings 6/24/10 . chapter 17
Sooooooo its exactly 2:30- Oh I'm sorry, 2:31 a.m and I just read your enitre fanfiction. AND BRAVO! This is the best story I hve ever read on this website EVER. I can't believe you don't have more views! Its rediculous! I don't care that I have a headache that feels like my brain is going to slowly start leaking out of my ears and I don't care that I am going to be a total mess in the morning. All I care about is that this story was AMAZING! Its so perfect in every way! I can't begin to describe all of the things that I liked about it but I shall indeed try.
1) Every single charcter was in character
2) Very clever plot. I can't believe you came up with all of that!
3) Bruce having PDAs with the Batclan makes my life
4) The part where Bats fights Clayface was EPIC
And pretty much a thousand other reasons why this was fantastic. THANK YOU for writing this story!
| D-boy 4/18/10 . chapter 7
This chapter was great! Scarecrow is my favorite villain, and he was personified greatly in this chapter. Also did you use the model from Batman: Arkham Asylum? I ask this because he has a claw hand.
| Kai-Chan94 4/16/10 . chapter 17
| Batmanluvr 4/16/10 . chapter 17
This was a great story! Good job! And yes, I did understand Bruce's whole plan, and I think it fits. And wow, you write Alfred so well. Bruce and his interaction in this chapter is just amazing.
There's only one thing that bothers me. You have Joker getting mad for failing to kill Batman. I don't think Joker would be so intent on killing him. Yes, he says he is, but I dont think he haes him. I like to think that Batman is Joker's play thing. Joker's life as an insane villain wouldn't be complete without him. Without Batman, there would be no reason for him to continue as a villain because it would be no fun to him. At least that's how I see it, and there are many versions of Joker, some I like and some that aren't my favorite.
But overall, you have a wonderful story. Thank you so much and I look forward to more fics from you.
| nequam-tenshi 4/14/10 . chapter 17
At least he was willing to accept their help. :)
| AZ-woodbomb 4/14/10 . chapter 17
There’s one place where you use the word "emulate" about the sound of Alfreds footsteps, which doesn’t really work since it’s another word for imitate. So I’m guessing you mean "emanate". Other than that there’s a few typos, but nothing too glaring.
Batman’s explanation doesn’t really make much sense, but it doesn’t matter. It’s a good story.
The Alfred-Bruce interaction is terrific. Their routine is charming. Tim is fun too and the whole happiness of the scene is really good. Everything feels so right, despite Batman going out while horribly injured.
I’m glad the villains realized how much fun Batman makes everything. Now they can go on forever and ever. Great story and I’m looking forward to the next one.
| AZ-woodbomb 4/12/10 . chapter 16
I’m extremely satisfied with Scarecrow getting away. I can’t help but root for the guy.
There is one typo here that bugs me: "may have been noticed a few brightly..." Usually I don’t mind typos, they’re pretty much unavoidable, but this is in the first line so it really sticks out.
Those are some nice moments there and the introduction of the trio is fun, but the lack of urgency when the league found him was a bit weird. Flash may also have been just a bit too unprofessional, a bit too much of a doofus.
Good stuff. Can we expect to see where the escaped villains went and why in the next chapter?
| GiveTheDevilHisDue 4/12/10 . chapter 16
Ha. Oh, Dick and your big mouth. I'm still loving the relationship all the other heroes have with Bruce. It's sweet and humorous at the same time. Can't wait to see what happens next!
| JasonTKD 4/11/10 . chapter 16
Yeah, Grayson's right. If Bruce feels like doing something, even if it's "just because", there's not much that COULD stop him.
He'd be like "So what. If I lose one lung, I'll just train to make my remaining one twice as strong. No big deal. " lol (the scariest part is, he'd probably manage to actually do it. When it comes to Batman, being a freakin nutcase is an advantage. lol)
| nequam-tenshi 4/11/10 . chapter 16
not that bad, really.
| GiveTheDevilHisDue 4/10/10 . chapter 15
This story is great! I love all the characters and the switching scenes from the Rogues and Batman to the Justice League and Alfred. Joker is scary and hilarious at the same time and Harley...well, you write her perfectly :) I also loved Bane, Strange, and Crane. They were all fabulous though! Keep up the great work!
| Batmanluvr 4/6/10 . chapter 15
The suspense is killing me! Great chapter! Please update very soon!