Far a long time since a lemon that was rather good. I feel SO much sympathy for Krad's neighbors though. Meh, maybe the enjoyed that scene like most of us readers. (Hey, you gotta admit, it could happen.)Well written either way.

i wish i was there neighbors ;)

Damn beeper

why didnt he open his eyes?

LOL

he forgot he cant fly XD

haha XD i feel so bad lol xD poor krads neighbors haha XD

Ow o

"And thus the beginning of a sleepless afternoon and night for both themselves, and Krad's neighbors' who could hear everyting."

haha XD that is awshome w

O_o

YOU HAVE IT!

The wicked mind that is... :-D

Was fun lol :-p

... ik vraag mij nog steeds af wa Dark voor heeft :-p

hebbek daar over geleze ofzo? XD

to the lemon part! -

tof tof :p

kheb wel een typ foutje gezien _"

He gazed at Krad and the blodn looked

nu zie je het ook zeker :-p

I like the story (y) :-p

When will your manga's be published? XD

lol nice ze :p

... wow :-O

You should write manga's! XD

greg ;-)

*passes out laughing* OMG. This is great!

best line: “haha Dark.. haha… no.”

Yay! make it loong one!

I wanna score you 150%!

well at least Dark can get out of the cast

update whenever you feel like it!

-raises eyebrow- things are getting heavy quickly between D and K eh?