hey, so far your story is going good. Sounds very different from most of the other stories i've read, which is a good thing.

Please continue

Well wow. That was detailed and different. It doesn't sound twilighty but...it does? I don't know, but I'm all for it. I'll be here for the next installment. :D

Interesting chapter. I look forward to the next. :)

This is a very interesting take on the Twilight series.

The 18th is my favorite time period. I am looking forward to reading more :)

Please update soon!

so,is this a romance between edward/bella and not jake/bella right?

her a jake are just friends right?

if the romance is with bella and edward it might be in wrong area.

because i was looking through romances for jake and bella and this came up,maybe it should be in the edward/bella area.

not trying to be mean but it gets confusing when looking for jake/bella romance stories and find this.

thank you:)