This rawks. The whole prospect of the utensils dancing around and such is a little bit too Snow White for my tastes, but otherwise your description is awesome. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but all very minor. Great job!

loved it very moving

This was really good :)

Cool! Excellant vignette! When I read the title, I assumed that it was a character fic about how Keiichi loves Bell. Nice surprise to see Kami-sama viewed as loving father figure!

I really liked the use of cinematic writing to encapsulate the flowering of emotions for all involved...

This story really glides softly on the eyes...

Thanks for a view through His eyes!

Aloha