|Reviews for Breakneck Sabbatical|
| me 3/4/13 . chapter 18
I really like your characterization of Dobby here. So many people forget to treat him like a real person just because he has bad grammer. I also like how he found a mission for himself, doing something to help Harry, but not needing to go ask Harry what he wanted, or even show Harry how he was helping. It struck a chord with me.
I also wanted to ask you not to trust spell check so much. I noticed this chapter or maybe the one before it, you used scared instead of scarred. I am scared of the dark. I am scarred from a bad car crash.
Millions of spiritual creatures walk the earth
Unseen, both when we wake and when we sleep.
John Milton, Paradise Lost
'The worst evils in the -world are not done by evil people, but by good people who do not know they -are not doing good' –
"You're only given a little spark of madness. You mustn't lose it."
– Robin Williams
We hear of the conversion of water into wine at the marriage in Cana as of a miracle. But this conversion is, through the goodness of God, made every day before our eyes. Behold the rain which descends from heaven upon our vineyards, and which incorporates itself with the grapes, to be changed into wine; a constant proof that God loves us, and loves to see us happy.
And the old classic:
There are more things in heaven and earth, Horatio,
Than are dreamt of in your philosophy.
Hamlet, Act I Scene V
| me 3/3/13 . chapter 16
I am supremely unconvinced that the nickname for Alejandro would be Alej. Since the J is pronounced like an H, Aleh would sound kind of dumb. Is the nickname more like Ale? (not ale like beer, but like ah-lay.) I will have to go ask someone now.
| me 3/3/13 . chapter 15
hahaha! Names! Totally right. Ginny's comment is hilarious and so is yours. My family is pretty small, and everyone still forgets each other's names. We even call each other by the cat's name sometimes. My grandma calls me by my aunt-by-marriage's name, and every man in the family is first called Jim, before you try any other name, since there are three of them. I don't even try, I just say Hi as I look at someone, that way I don't have to say their name!
| me 3/3/13 . chapter 3
Here is a review with a quote:
I liked James and Lily too. I think you took a major side-step with Harry's magic and character from cannon, but I quite like it anyway.
"I realized that Eastern thought had somewhat more compassion for all living things. Man was a form of life that in another reincarnation might possibly be a horsefly or a bird of paradise or a deer. So a man of such faith, looking at animals, might be looking at old friends or ancestors."
William Orville Douglas
| Mohoro 3/2/13 . chapter 18
I would just like to say how very much I enjoyed your story! I absoluetly love how you have played out Harry/Dean relationship.
I've read through your ANs and I have to say I would really love to meet you haha!
Your bonuses involving HP charecters are cute. Especially Dobbys last one.
In past fics I've read, when Harry leaves England he's usually in resentment towards almost everyone back home, which is really sad. I love how you kept him happy with his friends and just made Dumbledore the bad guy.
Thanks so much for your hard work!
"Music will save the world" -Pablo Casals
| Mallymkun the Dormouse 2/24/13 . chapter 18
"A little rudeness and disrespect can elevate a meaningless interaction to a battle of wills and add drama to an otherwise dull day." - Bill Watterson
| semexx 2/12/13 . chapter 18
I seriously dislike John and Dean. John is a total arsehole that should be shot and Dean is a stupid Daddy's-boy who needs a kid to fight his fights :(
| kid-kun 1/7/13 . chapter 18
I'm being completely honest when I say this is the best HPSPN crossover I've read. I absolutely love the way everyone is characterized and especially Dean and Harry. Their relationship is just so...augh, you know.
Anyway, hope to see a new chapter soon!
| Tanaki 1/3/13 . chapter 16
Not to be rude but can you do the bonuses at the end of each chapter as a separate story all together. It's annoying to scroll down and see long stuff that doesn't seem fit with the actual story. I like the story just not the extra part.
| KitsuneDango 1/1/13 . chapter 18
nuoooo i need more!
| Melikalilly 12/29/12 . chapter 18
I really Iike this story alot
| NightWithMoon 12/13/12 . chapter 18
Very interesting story thus far. Rather interesting author's notes, when I take the time to read them, too. I look forward to updates.
| Becca 12/13/12 . chapter 18
Please please please, update soon! I really really like this story. When is it going to be finished?
| yamiduke13 11/26/12 . chapter 18
I have really been enjoying this story and I think you have done a fantastic job with it. I look forward to more.
| yamiduke13 11/26/12 . chapter 9
Okay this chapter made me laugh so much. I have to say the Christmas cookie part was my favourite. I start laughing just thinking about it and I can so easily picture what was happening in my head.