Hey...I know you haven't updated this in two years...but, it is kind of awesome. Please consider continuing. I wanna see everyone's reaction to Harry when the loop finally does break. And when is he going to realize Hermione fancies him? at least that's what I've picked up from your subtext.

lizieaxes

This story is absolutely fantastic. I was looking through the very few time loop fics there are, found yours and thought the concept was interesting. I like how this one is only one day; some people's cover years. It was a new idea to have Draco stuck as well, and I like it. What better way to make up than by being trapped in a time loop?

I'm SO looking forward to how Draco is going to react to Harry's way of killing him, before the time loops it probably would have gone something like: "POTTER! What until my father hears about this!" And Harry would have simply stated that it was payback. But he'll most likely be jealous that Harry survived...

Anyhoo! I have just a few questions. Who will Harry end up with (as a pairing) in the end? I might have been mistaken, but I think you were hinting at Harry/Mione at the beginning, or Harry/Ginny, but now Harry's stuck with DRACO. Just wondering. And before Harry escapes (I'm assuming he does), is he going to mostly focus on studying still? Or give up at one point and just given in to his inner Marauder, like Ron suggested?

Looking forward to an update!

-MC

This is a interesting story, and I do hope you continue with it in the future :)

kewl.

I really like your stories and writing style, especially this story. I do hope you continue it some day.

Nice story! Post more!

It's a lovely take so far on the groundhog loop and unlike lionheart your story I can actually feel interested by the isolation he feels. and adding Draco to the mix has definitily added an interesting thing

Is the romance going to be with Draco?

This story is getting a Perfect Lionheart feeling to it (and like another reviewer said, that's not good).

What this means (to me, at least) is that a story starts out great and you just have to keep reading it, only for something messed up to be tossed in. I saw your last line, but I still wish you had kept it to Harry being the only one going through the loop. It's the same thing that killed Chunin Exam Day for me: the inclusion of all those people in the time loop.

It's still a great story, and I'm almost positive I'll come back when it updates, but right now the last several chapters have kind of killed it for me.

And that sucks, since this is the first story like this that I've seen. Oh well.

This is a very interesting story, but I do have a few gripes. I fear this will have a PerfectLionheart feel in some respects (which is NOT a good thing).

Harry needs to focus on things that matter. Boring plot aside, Naruto in chunin exam day could waste time and do whatever he wanted because he didn't have a care in the world. Harry in this story has a rival in Draco Malfoy. He can't waste time on learning insignificant and mundane things because he can very easily fall behind. Furthermore, in addition to the fact that Draco has killed him already, in this last chapter with Harry attempting to sacrifice Draco for his own freedom, it appears that Draco will now not only be a rival, but an enemy. So why, for the love of all that is good and holy, is Harry learning French, Japanese, German, and how to play the guitar?

Harry has a legitimate threat in not only Voldemort and his followers, but now in Draco Malfoy. Why is he wasting his time? Back to the PerfectLionheart thing, seriously if you write a chapter about how Harry learns to work with leather or something I might just feel the need to smack you with a fish. Why a fish? Because I can.

Anyways, don't read this review and think, 'Wow, this guy really hates this story!' I don't. For the most part, I like it. I only want it to not suck later on, so I'm pointing out these issues now as opposed to later when it'll be too late to fix them.

-Lineape (AKA PinstripedPajamas at DLP)

PS. I like your recommendation engine, and that's how I found this story.

Loved it, as always. Found it intensely fascinating, as always. Can't wait to read more, as always. :) Happy writing and merry Christmas!

I'm kind of hoping this will be like 'Reload' eventually. So far, good job; I hope you'll update more often, though.

9/10 for spelling and grammar.

6/10 for vocabulary.

8/10 for format and layout.

8/10 for plot.

31/40 overall. Good story.

i like malfoy thank god you didnt kill him for real keep up the good work

thank you for sharing this fantastic chapter please continue to update a.s.a.l.a.

Really good! hahahaa I can imagine they{ll last forever if harry and malfoy have to help each other xD Really nice by the way, how you devoloped harry from the last chapter