Nice work on this.

I hope you update again soon.

Keep at it.

daww, leave avatar alone plz, or at least help the na'vi(i have an intresting plan that involves russ, the coid dragon, the EMperor, the tree of souls and the Emperor(If you know about the seeds of the life tree russ is seeking you know what I mean by the Imperium choosing the side of the Na'vi in the na'vi-RDA conflict(treee of souls tree of life if you hadn't guessed by now)

Amazing simply amazing. This is possibly one of the best 40K stories I have have ever read. If I had read this anywhere else I never would have suspected this to be fanfiction. From your very accurate portrayals of the Guard forces and the Space Marine Chapters to your detailed descriptions of Pandora and the Na'vi shows the great amount of research and effort you put into this.

Please do not leave this story incomplete. I eagerly await the next chapter.

Hah!

Don't think of me as a cold, heartless bastard, but you have no idea of the happiness you gave me when Lithial died. I know the Eldar are just trying to stop them from releasing the C'tan; but their general dickery makes it difficult for me to sympathize with them at all.

They could have maybe tried telling the Imperials: "Hey, there's a C'tan stuck under this tree. I know we don't like each other, but how about we put aside our differences on this one so we don't let the thing out?"

cool! Pretty good so far! Needs quite a bit of proff-reading though... More please!

So the Pandora's purpose was to imprison a Necron Star God C'tan in a powerful magnetic field generated by unobtanium?

Mon-keighs will see the errors of their ways when they start mining.

Without going into further the story, why haven't the Imperials just firebomb the forests where the resources lie underneath? It would certainly improve the environment. Less things to hide from when everything is ashed. Anyway interesting start, gonna go read now.

one question what craftworld do these eldar belong to?

Okay... so generally I hate crossovers. But this is just brilliant.

You brought the world of Pandora to 40K in a very believable mannner.

Hope there's more to come and you've not given up on this fiction.

I demand nids! Nidsnidsnidsnidsnidsnids!

WOW i love this ! Die navi die!

There's a good story in here somewhere, but there are also quite a lot of grammatical errors and poor sentence structure. May I suggest getting a beta reader?

I love your descriptions. can't wait for the battle.

there were some typing/spelling errors.

The incarnation of war, blood and rage. Good going Imperium, this might be a bit much for you to chew.

I smell one helluva fight about to crash down on the xenos tag-team.

I've only got one request, and as it's about a canon character, its probably irrelavent, but you mind not killing Redmaw?

Or, conversely, if you do, send him out with an uber-huge bang.