Reviews for The Girl From Whirlpool
Mizuno Tenshi2 5/21/13 . chapter 27
Wow, I hope this story gets continued someday, it's really good. Though the ending that fits with canon is just too sad, isn't it?
RedditNaruto 5/20/13 . chapter 27
I just read this for 24 hours straight, got to this chapter, and realized to my horror that it wasn't finished.
This is me, asking you, on behalf of all the people in the Naruto subreddit ( r/Naruto), to please continue this. If you need inspiration or support or just a good group of people to "hang out with" online, I'd suggest making an account and posting that you're the author of this wonderful story. They'd love you there.

And, just to let you know, you should write a book. With your writing style, you'd succeed flawlessly. This story has enthralled me, and I will continue to check up on it, as well as check r/naruto to see if you post. Please consider continuing this work of art, and thank you for taking it this far.

Sincerely,

Schloopers, of r/Naruto
Guest 5/19/13 . chapter 27
I really enjoyed this story. Wish it was longer though, but great job!
babygong 5/18/13 . chapter 4
PLEASE update this. I'M BEGGING YOU. This story is so amazing, you can't just abandon it!
Domos Bread 5/12/13 . chapter 1
I like it. It's just so cheesy when they get to be like that, desperately needing to confess to each other.
TheGirlOfMyHeart 5/10/13 . chapter 27
Come on, please update. :) I'm dying for a new chapter. Oh, and by the way, I don't think I like Minato's beard, though... XD
justanotherfan 5/9/13 . chapter 27
Oh man, I wish you'd continue this.

Excellent grammar, spelling and flow. I love your writing style so much I wish I had it. One of the stories with the best character developments in my opinion.

However, what I really love about this story is that when I'm reading it, it seems as if you're simply narrating what you see in your eyes. I don't feel like you're forcing down their throats what to feel/do when confronted with a certain circumstance because the dialogue, the characters they interact with, the situation and the like work so well together.

Oh, and this, I really like this line: "What kind of father would turn his own child into a monster?" Oh damn, that burned.

Overall, one of the best fics I've read. Yeah, and even if I said earlier that I wish you'd continue this, I won't really end up reading all the chapters anyway, since I get all emotional when it comes to the tragic end of the Namikaze-Uzumaki family (and I think I'm going to cry if you write about the ending, especially when you've portrayed Minato and Kushina so so so wonderfully). xD
Yukino-chan 5/9/13 . chapter 27
at least it's an acceptable cliff... and guess what...I seriously will mix this fic up with canon...
silverscribbles 5/7/13 . chapter 27
Hey! I've managed to read the entire thing now! Love your story! The characters are great! I like the way relationship between Minato and Kushina developed - and it was just at the right pace!
adrian11 5/3/13 . chapter 3
This is amazing, the interactions between characters and Minato's opinion and commentary on a lot of stuff is hilarious. Kushina's personality is really fun. Thanks for posting this, you've really made my day!
DaarkLord 5/3/13 . chapter 27
I've been looking for a story like this for a long time.
Jerza Fernandes 4/28/13 . chapter 27
For the love of good please continue I'm addicted
DiariesAreStupid 4/23/13 . chapter 27
Is this story still going on cause I really like it and would love for it to continue
XxTitaniaxX 4/17/13 . chapter 27
I really like this story! You write really well and you describe everything perfectly. Nice job
BoxAuthor88 4/8/13 . chapter 27
Dear lord, this story is AMAZING! I'm not sure you're going to get this review or even look at it but please, please update this story again. This story has to be the best kushina/minato story I've read yet! :3 I love your work! :D
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