grest stort a great read looking forward to more

Hi Ms. Buckets: You know that I love Clive Cussler too! Thanks for giving me the chance to read your story and review it. I love it! It is well written and is true to all the characters. Melody is an interesting character, and I am very curious to read more of her adventures, and to find out just what it was that she "confessed" to Dirk in writing. I have always really appreciated your creativity and am thrilled to see you use it in such a way! Keep going with this, and let me know when the next installment is ready to read! Much love!

This is amazing! You are very gifted, as Mr. Cercone has told you. I truly believe you may have a future in journalism ... although I wouldn't recommend a Miranda-Priestly type of future. However, your future is in your hands, and whatever you choose, you will be successful, and will be more of a wonder than you already are.

I am anxious to hear what happens next ... don't keep us all waiting too long. What is Melody up to? Why did she run away? What are her secrets? I want more of Al!

This is a great piece of writing, and I think you should be very proud.

Your Mom