   Phyonnah 8/15/11 . chapter 4I love this story. I have read it over and over again and plan to keep reading again and again. |
| Anonymous 5/17/11 . chapter 4 I usually don't like alternate reality fics but this one is amazing! |
| sexy jo 4/18/11 . chapter 4 awww! this story was so fun, flirty and cute! I love Roy and Riza, great job! |
| CrescentSnow 1/4/11 . chapter 4 Whoa!
Mice ending...
I like it |
| Sonomi-chan 10/16/10 . chapter 4 Oh my gosh, this story is so cute! I loved reading it. |
| halledean 6/3/10 . chapter 4 This was so cute! I loved it even though it doesn't go along with the real story. GAH! It was adorable! |
| Rikkautro Efaltia 5/22/10 . chapter 4 GYAAAAAAAAAAHHH!
Cute sexy and owww... sweet :)) |
| e1nav57 2/13/10 . chapter 4 loved it.:D |
| lalalatala 2/2/10 . chapter 4 i really enjoyed reading this-it was really sweet! royai all the way! |
| LuckyBubbles 2/1/10 . chapter 4 ahahahaha tht was good i liked itt very muchly :D |
| Kick-It-Aus Style-Mal's 1/26/10 . chapter 4 I finally got around to reading,all of this ficlet. It was a very good idea,and you used it at Rebeccaperving on roy XD |
| zagoorian athena 1/26/10 . chapter 4 I LOVE IT! :DD |
| EmilyLauren1923 1/25/10 . chapter 4 I thought this was really cute and sweet. :) |
| Athena's Heart 1/23/10 . chapter 4 Sweet. I really enjoyed it :) |
| Luftslott 1/23/10 . chapter 4 I loved this story! Especially the ending - so cute and fantastic!:D Excellent work;) |
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