this was great the last part was so funny. good luck on the contest.

aww! ha ha, I love Bella's last line!

So Cute!

Heehee - Edward the night owl. I always thought of him as a different creature of the night. ;)

Jessica? Late? Heaven forbid. I guess since she doesn't really know how to use the software, it doesn't matter that she's made herself incapable of using the keyboard.

I'm a little upset that you put a picture in my head of Edward in a tight body suit. It's very distracting. ;) For some reason, I know it was blue with black panels on the sides. Don't ask.

For some reason, Lauren showing up in the middle of Edward trying to find out her new appointment time was really funny to me; I think it was the fake smile he had to paste on.

The ending is so sweet! But I feel like I need more...perhaps...another chapter? Or two?

PLZ update son! Luv the story! :)

I loved it!

:)

that was cute. sometimes we need stories without the smut.

Haha, Wiggle Your Toes. Did you make that up?

Great one-shot. Very well written.

I really did laugh out loud at Lauren's antics. Her attitude toward the Thera-bands! Her swimsuit! Offering to kiss his hand and make it better! Truly hilarious, and yet, I feel for her. In her place, I'd do anything to prolong my time with Edward.

I enjoyed the whole atmosphere of the office, and how Bella and Edward got to know and admire each other. Another very sweet story, very well told!

cute story!

That was great! Made me smile and that is always a good thing.