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Reviews for: Erised
MoonyIsTheMan
2007-08-17 . chapter 1
That was interesting...
allara serasai
2004-09-20 . chapter 1
*wipes away tear*

Lovely
bookworym
2004-04-23 . chapter 1
aw poor dumbledore... its good signed ~*the worm*~
Qw
2003-12-29 . chapter 1
I've had this on my favorites list for ages & can't believe I haven't reviewed. Blame it on being utterly speechless. This is beautiful. Completely mundane imagery (but so vivid) telling such a story. I'm amazed at what you've done with so few words. Wow.
JazzMind
2003-11-29 . chapter 1
Well, that's the _formal_ definition of drabble, yes. I'm not sure I understand the second paragraph, but give me another minute.
Mari
2002-06-07 . chapter 1
Wow. Short stories are harder to write, but this was a masterpiece. Thanks for the best hundred words I'll read all day.
-Mari
I.C. Fire
2002-01-24 . chapter 1
AWEEEEEEEE! that is so sad.... ^_^; Poor old dumblebum
lightninG
2002-01-24 . chapter 1
I love the idea, and especially the way you wrote it - the words and sentances flow.
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