Love love love this story and hope it's not gone the way of so many wonderful fics with an infi-hiatus! Please, if you've got the time to write, I would adore you all the more if you continued this amazing fic! 3 3 3

Woah.. I finished this in three days because I was so hooked. It says this was last updated a year ago.. It's sad but even here as an ending, it's still beautiful. It pulled my emotions and I -felt- it.. Really spectacular job, both of you. I normally prefer Zim/Dib as a more.. rivalry, hate kind of ship, but even with the sentiment in this it was exactly how I pictured. the only thing I could even crit was that Dib seemed to think everything should be solved by sex (which in a perfect world, it would!) But honestly I'm not even bothered. I'm still in some stage of shock from this ending, I applaud you. I'll definitely reread it some time.

I've been reading this whole thing in about 3 days or so and
OMG this is SO F-ING INTERESTING3
the sex is hot, the drama is realistic for it's labels, the characters are in character for it's labels, the fluff is adorable and it's all just brilliant, if not a little long for so little to happen but that is good in the way of it being very detailed
please keep updating this fic because I really want to know where it's all going X3

Oh. My. GLOB! This was amazing! I just finished the last chapter and am IN LOVE. :D
I hope you don't put it on temporary Hiatus because it's soooo awesome!

I'm just wondering. Is the explody thing with Keef from an unreleased IZ episode? From one of your other fics that I haven't gotten to yet? Or is it just a plot point to roll with in this story?

This is amusing as heck, especially the Zim-isms that you come up with.

You're also doing pretty well at the editing so that every paragraph doesn't go back and forth with a time-jump backward for each. The story reads more easily for that...

I never read incomplete stories that appear to be droped but yours is a special case,I liked your other IZ fics so much I just couldn't ignore this one,also I am amazed than a co project feels so natural,I think I already said so in a previous coment months ago but I'll repeat it,I would never guess this is done by two people if I wasn't told so,that said I really oope you decide to continue,until then!

All the fun of a PWP but with plot included! Score! But seriously, you two should quit your jobs. You have promising careers in the porn-writing industry. I am almost desensitized to yaoi like I was long ago to het, but this... Hoo-ee. I love it. My body did too, and that's even with the random interruptions at the beginning lol. BTW, I found those teasing interruptions extremely amusing. Oh those poor, sweet, tortured boys!

Well, I won't say much because I suck at giving reviews, but I'll just say this is a really good fic. The characters are very well played (and Zim is FRUSTRATINGLY in character! XD) and the whole thing is just very well written. Hee Zim and Dib are so cute when they're...protecting eachother.

Its so cute how Zim has yet to learn what the pain is in his spooch. He's so adorable not knowing that his unaccepted love his hurting him. Gods! I could hug Zim forever cuz he's just to cute! :D *fangirlsqueek! 3

this is great.

You two are masters I must say. Really this is one of the detailed, heart-renching fics I've ever read. I hope a update is soon in coming. I really do. I enjoyed this story very much.

Tarry a while. Thou art so -Tama

okay. long review coming up.

I was referred here through the TVTropes fanfic recommendation page. I would now like to say that I have no regrets. I would make the less than three sign as a heart, but eats that stuff so it would just be a 3.

I am insanely impressed with this. Your friend is an amazing Zim and Gir. You, I think, have the harder job in characterizing Dib, because Dib's character isn't as distinctive as Zim's. In these stories Dib has to abandon a lot of what makes him Dib: his paranoia, his hatred of Zim, his childish cruelty towards Zim. The only thing that remains is his endless obsession with Zim. Zim is so distinctive with his arrogance and zany behavior. Not that I am not super impressed by your friend who RPs him. Because I really, really am.

One thing that stood out to me in a much earlier chapter, was something Zim said when he and Dib were...I wouldn't call it sex...or making out...maybe I'll say 'while they were passionately hating each other in a physical way' XDDD. This is the basic gist of the dialogue.

Dib: Oh God!

Zim: Your God thing is not necessary, while do you call out for it, Dib-worm?

*a minute later*

Zim: Aaah, Tallest!

This cracked me up, partly because it's funny, and partly because it reminds me of the scene where that kid gets whacked in the stomach with a ball and is like "OWCH MY ORGANS" and Zim laughs maniacally at him, "PUNY PATHETIC INFERIOR HUMAN ORGANS MWAHAHAHA-" and he gets whacked in the stomach by a ball and falls over "-OWCH MY SQUEEDLYSPOOCH". That part already makes me giggle, but it just showed me how totally in character this is.

Keef is delightfully horrifying and disturbing, and even he remains in character.

I love the interactions in this. Dib and Zim play beautifully off of each other in their delightfully awkward, antagonistic way. I could gush over this Zim for a long time, but this Dib is also so much love.

The rape was as horrifying as it should have been without being too graphic, and we all share Dib's horror when he realizes what's happening and rushes to the rescue.

The only problem ever at all in any way that I have with this fic is the way they NEVER USE LUBE. Like, not even spit or anything. They seem to take it for granted that when a guy shoves his dick up another guy's ass, it has to happen just like that and that it is going to be agonizingly painful for the receipient (peppered with moments of pleasure). That is the only thing that puts me off about the sex scenes. THe rest of it is delicious.

(also, at the beginning of the fic, when you revealed that Zim's antennae were erogenous zones, I loled, because abuse of erogenous zones is a personal kink of mine)

That being said, PLEASE DON'T GO ON HIATUS MY LIFE WOULD EEEEEEEEND. THIS BEAUTIFUL FIC MUST CONTINUUUUUUUE. I COMMAND IT IN THE NAME OF THE GREAT FANGIRL EMPIRE.

but real life sucks sometimes :( *sadface*

I used to think 20 and 21 were my favorite chapters (;D) but this is probably my new favorite chapter. Please, please PUH-LEEZE keep updating. We need more. MORE. MORE! Hehe... that's what she said. Or in this story, that's what HE said. I need an ending. I REALLY hope that this isn't one of those stories that is amazingly awesome, and then the author never finishes it. I seriously doubt it, but still. So yeah. Fucking AMAZING story. Keep it up :)

Man why rape? WHY? It was such a great story. It could easily have been almost rape. Although if you where planning some weird ass mpreg later with it I'm glad Im stopping now. Rape just ruins the story.