nice first chapter, nut i just gonna mention that legolas CANT give up his immortality. the only reason arwen could was because she is only half elven, not full like legolas.

geez, what a fast end o.o I thought the Uruk-hai would have done more to Legolas than just that... either way, I liked the fic, it sure was very nice. but I really do think you could've developed more on some issues throughout the fic.

hey. i just read your story and i really liked was awesome. you know you should really write a seguel. that would be great. i really enjoyed reading your story, don't stop now

I loved this fic. The emotions and the action blended perfectly. I'm moving on to the revised first one now. Keep up the good work.

vcool story, great continuation of the other !UNFINNISHED! story.
Luv Katti (Marblez)

that was sweet. i really liked it. keep that ending

Would I mind If Aragorn was an half elf anf Immortal? Hell no

Very good story. I truelly loved it!

This was an all right ending-Iwould have liked more A/L action, but it was a good story none the less.

AH! Did they kill him? Please, no.

Ai yi yi! ! ! Why does everyone always say things they don't mean? Stupid people!

Aww, now I feel sorry for the "stupid Dwarf" not the "Crazy Elf!"

Oh, that's cute, Leggie and Arrie talking in Elvish in front of Gimli!

Oh, poor Legolas. I hope he gets better soon!

Legolas, must you be so proud? Just let Aragorn heal you, for goodness sake!