Tehe! The last section was cute! :D

Fun story, if a little implausible. Thanks, Beth Palladino

That was so cool. Loved the story cause I'm such a massive Jesse fan yey.

erm... the story itself is good, but the science is seriously flawed. never seen dizzy, nauseous and sensitive to light before? how about migrane, meningitis, most viruses generally and so on. the leap to a genetically modified disease is frankly ridiculous. i know this is a story, but you really should get the medicine behind it right, not just pick out fancy words because they sound impressive.

GREAT story! i loved it. can't wait for the next one to come! THe only problem ihad reading it was the stange characters throughout the story. Try to remove them for the next one, okay?

Wow! I love the story! Keep on writing!

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This story is excellent! I can't believe it's your first fan fic, you've captured each of the characters personalities perfectly and the story flows extremely well.

I love Jesse fan fics as he is my favourote character so please write another soon!

Well done on a great fan fic!

Maria :-)

Awesome story! Great idea... You have a wonderful creative imagination. Jesse is my favorite character and I LOVE any story about him, but this was just fantastic. You did a wonderful job of keeping him in character. You are a very talented writer and I will be on the lookout for more!

*Great* story.

Finally, someone who'll focus on Jesse (who's the *real* cutie of the show).

WHUMP THE BOYS!

Laura

This was a great story, it flowed really well. I am glad you changed the bit about the needle though, it made a lot of difference. I hope you will write some more - soon.

Tracy

Becca, I really did enjoy this story. It is always good to see Jesse at the centre of a story - even though Steve is my favourite! I really liked the part where Mark stayed by Jesse's bedside and the thought processes that he went through to reach that decision. Keep on writing.

A great story Becky - it makes you just want to scoop up Jesse in your arms and hug him better! Keep up the writing and I look forward to your next adventure.

It's me again! I loved it! It was fantastic! Really, you did an excellent job and I can't wait for your next fic (so get crackin'!). Again, b/c I'm into getting constructive criticism, I thought I'd lend you some. In your first paragraph, you used the word "window" three times. The last time, the word "it" could have been used so you didn't sound repetitive. It's a tiny little thing, but I'm anal retentive and would appreciate the advice if it was my story. Thank you so much for this fic. It's the best one I've seen for Diagnosis Murder. jenbe

Good Job!