DUDE! Update this. This is AMAZING! Keep up the good work.
Till next time

This is good love it, and still love the game

Holy sweet mother of awesome!

I really dig this. It's a logical plot, legibly typed (isn't it surprising that some people on this site can't even TYPE in a readable fashion?) and IC.

One thing about a few chapters back: I thought the point of Bleeding Death was that they bled to death, meaning that running away was a suitable option and wasting your energy fighting was just dumb.

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So far, so good. The story is holding up to his origins and the characters are acting as they should react.

Good job, keep doing this story.

Epic indeed.

This is an excellent follow up to one of the greatest love letters to metalheads ever produced. Well done and please, please keep going.

Peace out and Rock on,

Anzer'ke.

nice job keep it coming

really good, can't wait to see how you continue the story

DUDE! this is a metal tale! I really do hope that this goes on for a long time, because this is high grade fanfiction packed into chapters of brutal combat.

:...it was good.

Amazing, simply amazing. I've been waiting for the fourth chapter (been driven mad by the antisipation but good things come to those who wait right?) and finally its here.

You did awesome on the characters. They act and do exactly like they do in BL. I don't care what anyone says though about how you made the Kill Master in chapter four because I think it was spot on. In a matter of desperation and frustration anyone can act any way.

I can't wait to read the next installment. I know it's going to be as great as this one.

Good chapter, and love the Motley Crue reference.

Again, this fic just reminds of my love for the game. And the music, of course. DEUCE! The secondary weapons are great too. I'm quite fond of the sideburners myself.

Okay, this line: ". He took a knee, washing his blood spattered hands in a puddle, which happened to be a puddle of blood." Are you sure you're not Tim Schfer in disguise? XD That's exactly something that would occur in-game.

Love the Zaulia. Their dilemma is so...realistic, I guess, stuff like that happens in war, I so admire their connection to their home.

Also? Love Eddie's struggling with Riggnarok's legacy. Super-dramatic..well, not battle, but strategic retreat. Very cool. Great last lines too, managed to slip in a meta comment too, just like the game. Heh, the weather *is* weird (tho I guess that's all relative).

Oh, this is spectacular! I am most impressed, good sir! A BL fic that doesn't suck! I love it all. The descriptions of the battle was great, just like the game. This story is a great continuation of the plot - intriguing storyline, and great action. Characters are spot on.

A couple of other reviewers think the Kill Master seemed OOC, but I think it was totlly logical. I would think all of the humans are warriors to one degree or another. It makes perfect sense for him to investigate possible threats to the freedom they managed to win. I'm sure doctors can kill too, if they have a really good reason for it (tho all that's coming to mind now is this one episode of "House").

Anyway, I can only hope the BL fusion fic I'm working on is even half as good as this. :)

Nice Chapter.

Kill Master was a little OC with the "kill" part, since he did take an oath.

Also his mountain is called Tophat Mountain. No offense.

I do heavy research on Brutal Legend. I know that Lionwhyte's army is called the Hair Metal Militia. Can Lionwhyte appear? One Razor Girl said there was no body, so he could still be alive.

I have seen all the lore.

Is the woman seen Atulia?

Also will the darkness-loving first ones appear?

Nice. Kill Master was a little out of character, but it was still a good read. Good chapter length too.

But does this mean no one's seen Eddie grow wings or turn red in a fight?

Nice! There really aern't enough Brutal Legend stories, even though the game was awesome. If a little short.

Anyway, this chapter was a little short but full of action, which makes up for it. I look forward to the next installment soon.