Your "sodden, melodramatic angst" had me on the edge of my seat. Very subtle interaction going on here. You obviously put a lot of thought into it, exploring both the Mibu and the rurouni's psyche. Very well done.

I liked it. It was nicely written and I think it really showed what each of them would think. Nicely done. _

Cool insight into Kenshin's mind. I also liked the interaction with Saitou. Hey, forget unhilarious comedy. This melodramatic angst is just great. :)

cool! i like the way you can get into thier heads without OOC! your good and i would love to see your comedy works!