Reviews for Surprise M'Ending
mauralee88 5/8/10 . chapter 9
Great update. Loved Jake going wolf when he smelled Alice and Jasper, and that Cassie kicked them out so he'd phase back.

Nice to see her acknowledge their bond, and call him her mate.

Sad to know the series is coming to an end. Looking forward to seeing how it all wraps up.
dirtychicken 5/8/10 . chapter 9
Great chapter! It made me smile! Thanks for posting!
katmom 5/8/10 . chapter 9
ALICE! JASPER!

That was wonderful to start this chapter off...

Your words actually made me HURT for Jake...the poor guy!

LOVED that the Cullens helped to such a degree...

And three days...he knows he can survive THAT...

His promise to her on the bed...wonderful...

And her reactions...

Yes, this was GREAT...(said in my Tony the Tiger voice)...

Thank you for sharing...

Kathie
Thats-So-Alex 5/8/10 . chapter 9
Aw! That was so cute! Loved it!
I liked Alice's intervention as well, it was nice to see some Vampires! Haha. :)
Looking forward to more! :)
TheUnderStudy 5/5/10 . chapter 3
I can't stand his ho already!
TheUnderStudy 5/5/10 . chapter 1
Aw Jakey. He is so emotional! Jasper would be having a field day
baruka athena 5/5/10 . chapter 8
I'm totally in love with your pack stories by now :). Leave it up to Jake to imprint on someone this willful. I think being with Cassi will be hard, but utterly rewarding in the end for him.

I'll be looking forward for an update on this story.
flyymackenziie 4/27/10 . chapter 8
I'm reading this one and NSTC at the same time, and I just wanted to say I love your writing and I appreciate the cliffhangers. But I still hate being in suspense! I don't know how often you update, but pretty please say soon!
WolvesCanEatMe 4/22/10 . chapter 8
OH Noes! Cassie isn't where she supposed to be! I 3ed the interaction btw Bella and Jacob... It was like old times but different!

I think you did a good job portraying Jacob's mood through this chapter too. Thanks for updating, it was worth the wait!
wuogkat 4/21/10 . chapter 8
So Jake's actually going to have a civilized conversation with Alice? This should be amusing... ;-)
mauralee88 4/20/10 . chapter 8
Poor Jake! Love that Bella called Alice, gotta use the resources available to you.
Bells. Just Bells 4/19/10 . chapter 8
Alice! :)

Sorry, is it bad that hearing from Alice made me so extremely happy? But I just so love Alice, and it's awesome to have her helping Jake, because OF COURSE she would! Jake better stop being so mean about her. sheesh. lol, sorry...

Anywho, back to the chapter at hand. I loved it of course! I love seeing Jake and Bella just be friends the way they were supposed to be. I know this isn't easy on Jake, but I'm glad to see he's not completely mad...yet at least.
mcamastow 4/19/10 . chapter 8
I wonder how Cassie is going to take Jacob showing up t her job.
dirtychicken 4/19/10 . chapter 8
Good job Jake! You kept your sanity! But I guess he hasn't seen her yet! Can't wait for the reunion! Great chapter! Thanks for posting!
Lady Dragona 4/19/10 . chapter 8
I love how Alice is reaching out and helping Jake. I think it is wonderful that Bella called her in the first place. I think that Jake needs to calm down and accept her help.
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