awesome. :)

I loved your Scorpius - he was very sweet. The jerk thing gets a bit old. Plus when guys blush it's hilarious! ...and endearing.

I don't think it was cut short, but you may need to work on the flow a bit (i know this is cutting hairs). I didn't totally understand why Rose came to the conclusion he was using her. I would just be confused if he'd told me he wasn't interested in anyone and then I'd over heard his convo with Vane.

I also thought it was really funny that 4-5 ex girlfriends mad you asexual! Hahahahha!

I really enjoyed your story, it was light, charming, and altogether entertaining.

hey, Rose and Scorpius fluff is ALWAYS good!

I like this one a lot. Really cute. A lot of fluff can be a good thing. Keep writing!

Cute!

HE IS SO ADORABLE

And I like how you didn't get into the issue of houses with them. People rely on that SO MUCH for all their conflict. It's pretty refreshing to see this. :)

I personally love inlove scorpius. Probaby because I have a real life thing for good guys.

It did ooze fluff, but it was gorgeous 3

Fluffy, but funny.

YOU'RE NEXT ON MY LIST

I actually did like scorpius's characterization. Much different than most fics out there, creating an interesting twist. I did feel as though it was a bit rushed, but rushed is okay for a one-shot.

i liked it a lot. i agree that it did go fast, but for a oneshot thats okay i think. it could definitely be made into a multichapter story, but since it isn't i think the progression is just fine. i also really liked Arden Vane. I don't mean in the way that i like her personally (ew) but i like that she isn't 100 percent slut. she has a personality. like you said, she's sweet but she's vain.

What's a fag? Do I really want to know?

KOREAN CULTURE? I'M KOREAN! Well, both of my parents are Korean, BUT IT STILL COUNTS! Also, you joined at 11? I thought that that wasn't possible. I'm going to try.

well I won't say anything mean but...THIS IS SO FLIPPIN CUTE! I like stories where scorpius is more shy and reserved. he seems like he should be different from who his dad was. more..quiet. and definately not slytherin. (:

ADORABLE!

DarbeLei