|Reviews for Love is Dead|
| mimi 1/21/12 . chapter 1
| isinkintohearts 5/13/10 . chapter 1
| Kenesu 1/10/10 . chapter 1
It's a okay story but it's just missing something like more detail, a bit of backstory like how Sam found out Carly asked Freddie out, more dialog. Maybe you can this sort of idea and turn it into a full multi-chapter story. Like something happens to Freddie and he gets taken away somewhere then comes back for revenge Mr. Todd style with a bit of Freddie tech magic for some humor. But with how Carly is in this story it seems she's a bit more like Mrs. Lovette not Lucy. Keep up the good work.
| Calm-Waters 1/10/10 . chapter 1
| Reading4Life 1/9/10 . chapter 1
I will say it was good but for the critism be ready. I felt like it was too short no a lot of emotions were exchanged. You need to add a little more dialougue to show there emotions and thoughts. Also I think it has to grow and have there thoughts written. If you want you can dedcribe things in more detail instead of saying it all in one sentence.