Awe, yay a happy ending. :)

Love it :)

Oooh. Mooreee! :D

keep up the great work

is their father going to find out that abby is his daughter?

is gibbs going to get tony's father to stay away from his son and will tony's father find out that abby is working there too? if he does will he be behave to her like he did when she was 4 years old and still lived with him?

Glad you added more. It feels a little more complete now but I wouldn't mind if you continued to add on once in a while;) LOL. This was a nice little AU twist.

it was a great story and you did a great job. it would have been even better if you added more to the story instead of it seeming like it was rushed but overall it was a good story ]

That's it? Rather rushed and unsatisfying ending, since there's no real emotion or exploration of the characters and interactions. There's a lot of potential here, with Tony and Abby and even with Gibbs and how he'd react to it.

Good story...can't you make it longer...