good story :)

did you get the title from Gavin degraws chariot ?

- Mia

cool

Excellent start. Great writing, would love to see more. Please?

Great start and I'd love to read more.

"database of Styrofoam peanuts"

say huh?

now you've got me distracted and trying to figure out what the heck a database of Styrofoam peanuts would be...

Very nice start! I really like it so far and I look forward to read more...soon!

I. Want. More. Quickly. Please?

There is more coming, right?

Please, please tell me there is more coming. This is a brilliant start to what I am hoping will continue.

I'll beg

:D

Lovely beginning, hope you continue soon!