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| Amenita Virosa 2005-10-04 ch 1,  | abusecan u update some time VERY SOON?!?!?!?! |
| Silverscale 2005-04-08 ch 1, | abusePlease update your stpries, it's so sad to watch them float around like unfinished dreams. |
| busso 2004-06-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseJust out of curiosity, are you ever going to update this? I like it and I've been waiting for a while. |
| rob 2004-03-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nice please continue this |
| Tora Tigress 2002-05-30 ch 1, anon. | abusePlease finish this story even if you don't win the second bet. |
| Ranko1 2002-05-23 ch 1, | abuseHuh, your view is pretty limited. But that's the wrong start. I think using one of the Palantirs as introduction is far better than the One Ring. However - who says Ranma has to stay on Earth? And who says the things in LotR have already happened? I think it'd be great to see what happened to the Fellowship of the Ring when Ranma was with them... as Gandalf's apprentice, supreme fighter and so on. |
| Kevin Schultz 2002-02-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseSome thoughts...well, I don't care much for the fox character (seems to be a bit of a rip-off from Metroanime with no real unique bits to make him interesting), but I find your depiction of both Gandalf and Samwise is quite good - you seem to have captured the voice of both characters fairly well. I would personally hope for a concentration on a single crossover, rather than the mega-crossovers. LotR has a lot of stuff to use, and there's no reason to have a bunch of other crossovers simply for the sake of having a bunch of crossovers. |
| Lee A. Hollensteiner 2002-01-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou have made a good start but there is much more that needs to be done. I truly like most of your ideas and eagerly await them being written. |
| pcody 2002-01-27 ch 1, | abuseA worthy start, with potential depending on the direction you choose to take. I look forward to reading later chapters. |
| ghost 2002-01-26 ch 1, anon. | abuselooks good i suggest a Reocrd of lodoss war crossover |
| Kryal 2002-01-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi, me again. I had a weird thought... If you DO go about making this a multi-crossover (I'm of two minds on that idea...), here's a thought: what if Pluto's Garnet Orb was really a Palantir, maybe disguised somehow. Hey, a Palantir does seem suited to being a key to the Time Gates... |
| spider 2002-01-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh this could be so good the posoblities are endless I would love to see what you could come up with |
| Kim 2002-01-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseInteresting... |
| Patrick777 2002-01-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like what I've read so far. Please continue with this story. There are some wonderful opportunities here. Please try to limit the number of cross-overs as that can get too confusing to the reader. |
| Peter Kim 2002-01-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think the first thing Gandalf will do is send them to the Hobbits since he fond of the Hobbits. Please write or update chapter 2 soon |