Just found this while reading through your other stories. This was really sweet. I just love when they are actually like a real couple and 'do it'..lol..that was really a nice, sexy way and very real, too. I also love it when people take the time to write in scenes based in and around canon happenings. Great job! *hugs*

Nice...

Found on lemonade stand. Love the alternative option better than original

I can't stand Jacob at all but I would love to read this from his pov. If you wouldn't consider writing it from his pov would you consent to letting me write one using this one shot. I would gladly write a disclaimers note saying that this one shot is yours that you were allowing me to use it as part of my own fic. If you don't want to it's completely understandable and I would harbor no hard feelings. You are a brilliant writer.

holy crow!

loved the oneshot especially the part where Edward was counting Bella's heartbeat!

Kisses from Spain

I liked this.

You always manage to stay true to canon as much as possible while taking the characters where we all wanted them to go!

I loved it! Seriously good work here! This is going into my favourites!

That was sooooo good! Seriously, I'm impressed. You're a great writer. I only wish that Stephenie Meyer had written something similar in her books. I would love them all the more. You're a great writer, keep doing what you're doing

Edward finally listened to Bella's pleas, and found the perfect wolf-repellent, to boot! Too bad SM didn't write something similar!

Loved, loved, loved it! This is the way it should have gone! Thanks!

Awe! So cute!:) another great story!

Aw, so beautiful. I love that Edward felt as if he were human again.

Another great story.

Nice.. La sigh... Loved it:)

Attaboy Edward...making love to Bella is excellent Dog repellent.

KK