| Reviews for Overly Critical |
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unreliablekamikaze 3/19/11 . chapter 1Left-handed again. XD THIS WAS AWESOME ITS GOING TO FAVORITES But really. Was as awesome as Prussia thinks he is. And frankly, Prussia thinks he's veryveryawesome. So. |
heygodcomplex 2/22/11 . chapter 1i love your sense of humor and this is absolutely brilliant. |
Pineapples Are Flawless 12/24/10 . chapter 1And then England gets it. But I don't. xD I loved this, though. :) |
Ophelion 10/20/10 . chapter 1Haha this is cute! I love the ending, it's so nice and sharp and funny! xD Poor England, he just can't enjoy US culture, huh. Not that he's trying very hard... My favourite part aside from the last line would have to be America's remark about his eyes being his social policies and would "rather not touch them". Hee hee! Clever. Thanks for the read! Awesome work. :D |
Utenakun 9/23/10 . chapter 1Haha, well done. "I'd rather not touch them" completely cracked me up. XD |
Ceri Moriarty 9/21/10 . chapter 1Aw, poor England! Forced to spend time with his annoying little brother… [sniggers] Oh, the lolz. Very nicely done! |
bluechaser 6/7/10 . chapter 1haha, this is funny as hell! Love it! |
bobalinabokonon 4/4/10 . chapter 1 Ah, the giggles. Cure for a cold, they are. Dunno why, but the Disney Peter Pan never bothered me (and the book might be one of my favorites like ever and now I have to reread it, huzzah). I miss the narrator's voice, but I love both Tinkerbells! Also America and England and Hetalia! and phlarghl. |
Sayabean 3/10/10 . chapter 1 Excellent. Love how you keep your characters dead in character and the comedy is just killer. This is the best show of USUK ever! |
chibiaries 2/21/10 . chapter 1Squee! So. Cute. I loved the Peter Pan lines, and especially the part with the Beatles and England's smugness. So very in-character for both of them. |
Shelly-Sells-SheaShells 1/29/10 . chapter 1"She makes it a party in the USA." PFTT XD I'm still laughing over that one. Next time that is on the radio, I will be getting many stares because of the non-stop giggling. Great dialogue and I love how you kept them in character. |
Guest 1/18/10 . chapter 1 Oh England. You are a gentleman in an unholy land. Loved it. |
Canadino 1/11/10 . chapter 1don't know why but I love it. It's so simply America. |
Vicious Whispers 1/11/10 . chapter 1"And anyway, she makes it a party in the USA.” England stares. And then England gets it. And then he says, “/No/.” Oh my god, your dialog is amazing. xD Hilarious story was hilarious. |
accented 1/10/10 . chapter 1YE. This was brilliance, Ren, just brilliance. I love the dialogue, which you are spectacular at, and their interaction was perfect. “Best band ever,” America says while he knocks over a lamp. England smirks. “Mine.” America makes a face, “Killjoy.” was amazingly hilarious. Thank you so much, Ren! |