|Reviews for Overly Critical|
| unreliablekamikaze 3/19/11 . chapter 1
Left-handed again. XD
THIS WAS AWESOME ITS GOING TO FAVORITES
But really. Was as awesome as Prussia thinks he is.
And frankly, Prussia thinks he's veryveryawesome. So.
| heygodcomplex 2/22/11 . chapter 1
i love your sense of humor and this is absolutely brilliant.
| Pineapples Are Flawless 12/24/10 . chapter 1
And then England gets it.
But I don't. xD
I loved this, though. :)
| Ophelion 10/20/10 . chapter 1
Haha this is cute! I love the ending, it's so nice and sharp and funny! xD Poor England, he just can't enjoy US culture, huh. Not that he's trying very hard...
My favourite part aside from the last line would have to be America's remark about his eyes being his social policies and would "rather not touch them". Hee hee! Clever.
Thanks for the read! Awesome work. :D
| Utenakun 9/23/10 . chapter 1
Haha, well done. "I'd rather not touch them" completely cracked me up. XD
| Ceri Moriarty 9/21/10 . chapter 1
Aw, poor England! Forced to spend time with his annoying little brother…
Oh, the lolz.
Very nicely done!
| bluechaser 6/7/10 . chapter 1
haha, this is funny as hell!
| bobalinabokonon 4/4/10 . chapter 1
Ah, the giggles. Cure for a cold, they are.
Dunno why, but the Disney Peter Pan never bothered me (and the book might be one of my favorites like ever and now I have to reread it, huzzah). I miss the narrator's voice, but I love both Tinkerbells!
Also America and England and Hetalia! and phlarghl.
| Sayabean 3/10/10 . chapter 1
Excellent. Love how you keep your characters dead in character and the comedy is just killer. This is the best show of USUK ever!
| chibiaries 2/21/10 . chapter 1
Squee! So. Cute.
I loved the Peter Pan lines, and especially the part with the Beatles and England's smugness. So very in-character for both of them.
| Shelly-Sells-SheaShells 1/29/10 . chapter 1
"She makes it a party in the USA."
PFTT XD I'm still laughing over that one. Next time that is on the radio, I will be getting many stares because of the non-stop giggling. Great dialogue and I love how you kept them in character.
| Guest 1/18/10 . chapter 1
Oh England. You are a gentleman in an unholy land.
| Canadino 1/11/10 . chapter 1
don't know why but I love it. It's so simply America.
| Vicious Whispers 1/11/10 . chapter 1
"And anyway, she makes it a party in the USA.”
And then England gets it.
And then he says, “/No/.”
Oh my god, your dialog is amazing. xD
Hilarious story was hilarious.
| accented 1/10/10 . chapter 1
This was brilliance, Ren, just brilliance. I love the dialogue, which you are spectacular at, and their interaction was perfect.
“Best band ever,” America says while he knocks over a lamp. England smirks.
America makes a face, “Killjoy.”
was amazingly hilarious.
Thank you so much, Ren!