 Pipkin123456 6/4/05 . chapter 1 That was jolly i'm jolly were all jolly! Next time can you maby put pipkin in you'r story! _ - ) ( |
 Drew L 3/5/05 . chapter 1 Slightly demented, but funny. |
 Window Girl 10/9/03 . chapter 1 Well, you were a littel cruel to Woundwort, but I like this a lot. |
 Silent Squeak 7/24/03 . chapter 1gosh tinie. that is so evil. lol. but... GO LITTLE BIRDS! i cant believe i remeber this from 8th grade... *sigh* we in 10th now... |
 Isadora 1/20/03 . chapter 1Hehe! It's funny! I mean absolutely no offense to any of the reviewers below, but if you found the summary too offensive, then why read it? I mean exists for creativity, imagination, and whatever we want to do with the stories, right? Again, i meant absolutely no offense by that! And, Sakura1287, its a great fic. I just love Kehaar. He's hilarious! |
 Ralli 12/7/02 . chapter 1 KEHAAR RULES! lol, down wit Woundwort :P
Mesa liked it, keep it up .
BTW, there IS a SEQUEAL written by Richard Adams (Tales from Watership Down) that HAS HAZEL ALIVE AND KICKIN IN IT, so yes, one of our fav bunnies is still alive, it just he kinda fast forward it at the end of Watership Down, so Hazel could still be in this (amazing how WD fans read WD and are too lazy to look for its sequeal...)
. anyways, mesa liked it! mwaha,'Hazel grinned, and motioned toward Kehaar’s children. “Do your thing, little birds, do your thing. Dispose of him.”' lol, byebye Woundwort :P |
 ILuvSnuffles805 12/4/02 . chapter 1Uh...the end's a little sick.(No offense) And just to let you know, Hazel died at the end of Watership Down, so how is he alive? Oh well. The grammar and word usage was really good though! And you have some pretty good descriptions! I like it, cept for the end. I don't think Hazel would do that, but that's just my opinion. It wasn't so bad though, don't get me wrong! I'll give it...an A-/B. Keep writing! |
 AndrewB 11/3/02 . chapter 1It just doesn't work for me, sorry. The English is good, which is a plus, and I can see what you're trying to do, but it ends way too quickly. Made twice the length this might have been really good, but as it is it's okay and no more. Wow, I feel mean writing that! |
 Colin 5/31/02 . chapter 1 lol. Die woundwort. |
 Eclectus 5/5/02 . chapter 1 cute epilogue!
die, woundwort, die! (lol)
i LOVE kehaar, isn't he the COOLEST!
i haven't seen a watership down fanfic in a while (*shock*)
cute |
 Eclectusbunny 4/20/02 . chapter 1 this is hilarious!
i LUV it!
I luv kehaar! |
 Sakura1287 4/17/02 . chapter 1DUDE! OK, i am sorry i offended all you WD ppl. I was just saying that because there aren't that many watership down fics out there. Ok, I am reviewing my own story i feel like a loser. I'm sorry I said that in my summary.
There, Happy?
yeesh. |
 Ormspryde 4/17/02 . chapter 1*I* would write WD fics for fun. I just haven't gotten around to it. So :P |
 FurrySkerl 3/30/02 . chapter 1 This wasn't very realistic.
And YES, I write fictions for fun. I take offense to what you wrote in your summary.
And, by the way, rabbits don't 'grin'. |
 Pequenino 3/22/02 . chapter 1Oh hey, that was a mean thing to do to Woundwort, what if he really changed?
How come this fic only has 1 review before me so far...it's really funny how people like the ones with bad English and mistakes and all that, but give less reviews to the nice ones. |