DAMNIT! JUST WHEN HE REALIZES HE LOVES HER THERES NO MORE CHAPTERS...DX GREAT STORY BTW XD

whooaa i just read 1 thru 50 and yea uhhh whoa wow and everything in between

Hey,

This was a good beginning to your story and I'm very excited to read the second part.

Wonderful!

Thanks,

LEB

I've often come across your story and never taken the opportunity to read it. THANK GOODNESS I DID! It's a brilliant start! The smell of the blanket and the realisation at the end...just wonderfully touching. And I like how Faye in this is not too...extreme in either sense. She doesn't become emotionally dead, miraculously mature or totally suicidal (despite her wanting to die, as such).

Anywho, for all the stories that I love and value (which yours has now joined), I try to note anyway in which it can be improved and the only thing I can think of, in this chapter, is that you missed a 'never' in one of the paragraphs. Completely minor and not really noticeable except to obssessees like me. I hope you don't mind if I review each chapter? Tell me if it does.

I really hope you join this fandom again. I'd love to read some more of your writing.

Tuppence

So this story if freaking awesome! I enjoyed it from start to this half and will continue to read the next half as well. The pacing is good, and its interesting how you write the chapters so short yet it seems enough for the chapter either way.

I adore the pairing and the way you got the two together or starting to anyway is great! One of the things I really like about the story is that everyone gets their POV on the situation at hand. Ein's was really cute and so was Ed's POV which must have been hard to do since she's so wild and spazzy. Good job!

So now I will be off to read the next story to this which will take me a while seeing how many chapters you got out. But then I know I'll enjoy every last bit. Awesome job! I'm out...

LostsoulofRegret _

Aw julia is a bitch for leading spike on and faye knows it, she's so me sad but I'll keep reading maybe shell get happier. And no spike can't die NO MORE FLATLINE!

so close to spoke and yet still so far away I love he irony here you have what it takes to be a great writer

OMG love it, you rePly capture the essence of fate in this fic I think your writing is great keep it up

*runs off to the next story*

Fantastic. I just feel the emotions between Spike and Faye just rolling out with the words.

It just keeps getting better and better.

And now Ed!

Everyone is back together again.

You really nailed Ed down too. Some people tend to go a little too crazy with her.

I love the way you change each chapter, where sometimes it's first person then other third. It changes it up.

Yay for the return of Ein!

I was hoping the little furball would come back.

This is classic. Jet getting his eyebrows plucked. :D

He, it's just getting better and better.

Unfortunately, homework calls. I'll be back again soon.

I always see this story's sequel on the front page when I shift around for fics to read and finally decided to settle down with this one first.

I've been breezing through the first 8 chapters so fast, I didn't want to stop for a review. I wanted to keep reading.

This story is fantastic. I feel like you have the characters down very well - while putting your own spin on how they would react post-RFB.

I can't wait to finish this and go on to the next story.