Sounds interesting...Hinata didn't stutter...that's a big turn.

Update again!

I had a great time to read your Naruto's stories this weekend, and I hope I will be able to read the next chapter of this one soon.

Thanks

Didi

Okay, I have quite a few things to say. First off, you were recommended to me by chocolatte-delight eho said you were one of the best writers she's ever read. I would agree if she meant in fanfics. I personally think you are a little more "pop" or populist then bonified excelent writing, but hey, I've often been wccused of being too critical. Bottom line, you write good enough to be successfully published and damn well better then I ever could or can.
Second, I just want to say that the3 hyuga just generally piss me off. Big time. nothing to do with your writing, just their whol "ultra traditional" view and the seal. which, if I made a chrater, I would make it a monster mary sue just to kill each and every hyuga main branch off except hinata AND harmlessly destroy every seal while he/she is at it.
Thirdly, I think people (and I mean you) really need to stop thinking of things in terms of "he is better, he will always win" (referring of course to hyuga versus uchiha). I believe this is devaluing what I like to call "the kill." The entire point of all fighting techniques is to get the other guy dead. If you do that you win. And that can ALWAYS be done by anyone accidently. A simple thrown kunai can kill Madara himself if it's timed or aimed correctly, by chance or otherwise. There are no Absolutes.
Anyways, yeah, that's it. sorry for the bruteness, it's what I know.

please update soon

I'm really enjoying this story so far! :D I hope you find the time to someday update.

i want to read more!

I sing you praises because I just love the flow of this story. Your characters certainly are entertaining - in a way that has me on the edge of my seat going "Shit! Did no, did not expect that!"

You certainly are a genius. Your plots are unique, not done to death at all and it's refreshing.

Keep up the excellent work, I'm sure you'll astound your readers in the future.

Cheerio.

You really have a knack for writing stories about intrigue within Konaha's clans. This time its the detestable Hyuuga council and their quest for more power.

Brave little Hinata. And now Itachi knows. The plan would be beneficial to Akatsuki as well, an offspring of Hyuuga and Uchiha. Hm.

I hope you update this soon. I can't wait!

wonderfully done! I hope you continue with this, I would love to see how things unfold!

Oh! Yet another fantastic story idea for the two.

I love both Neji and Hanabi's reaction to Hinata (and you write Neji's POV well). Itachi saying things his mother would have said was sad and a very good detail to flesh him out.

ah i can't wait for the next chapter! what a gripping plot! haha. i wonder who hinata is saving that marriage certificate for, too. anyway, lovely story and i can't wait for the next update :)

Itachi and Hinata are so well written in this. I really liked it.

Cool story and this is a great idea.

Of. As though the first chapter wasn't dramatic enough! You REALLY enjoying keeping the drama concentrated and bringing it to the forefront, no? And I love how you constantly keep on-point with the characterization with Hinata and everyone else- even fleshing Hanabi out into a compelling character! Fantastic work, as always.

A very magnificent opening scene- I love how you bring all the tension and drama of Hinata's ascension and then her mission into play immediately. God, you are GOOD at writing Hyuuga politics!