You cannot possibly fathom how hard I took the ending. I mean, them not ending up together when she still loved him and he still loved her was bad enough. Now she's helping his wife by delivering his child? That's a heartbreaker. But *sigh* it's a huge testament to your writing abilities to make a reader feel this strongly in a 5k words.

"I tried." love it i'm a sucker for your SasuSaku stories now.

my heart broke zomg
this was so heartbreakingly good gahhhh. xD

My heart did break. It broke and the small amount of hope you manage to leave alone was violently snatched when she came back and he still didn't leave that lady. Fml.

You have no idea how much pain this one shot left me.

nooooooo!

I like the way the characters were portrayed in this story. My ice-block of a heart was indeed shattered into a million pieces. Fantastic story.

My heart did, indeed, break. This was beautiful in its sorrow, and it's a hard, hard thing to be a reader who gets very emotionally invested in the characters. I seem to be attracted to reading depressing things-which, in theory, cannot be very healthy for one's emotional state. Oh, well.

Love it!

My heart broke

I'm not favoriting this because I do regularly re-read the stuff on there and this would make me sad and cry and be all "WHY-WHY DO I DO THIS TO ME?" On another note, I loved this because it was realistic and beautiful with a bittersweet tinge to it through out. It's something that'll stay with me for the longest time, and though it's not on my favorites, I know I will be back to re-read it when I need to be reminded why I love this fandom. Thank you again for abusing my heart.

I read this a long time actually, and it still brings back that bittersweet feeling. And it hurts godamnit. But that's a good thing I suppose, having that kind of long lasting affect on the reader. I commend you for you amazing writing skills because I'm still left tear eyed and thinking of the endless possible endings that could have but could not happen. Anyways away with my rambling. Great story, good back bone and great expression.

I read this a long time actually, and it still brings back that bittersweet feeling. And it hurts godamnit. But that's a good thing I suppose, having that kind of long lasting affect on the reader. I commend you for you amazing writing skills because I'm still left tear eyed and thinking of the endless possible endings that could have but could not happen. Anyways away with my rambling. Great story, good back bone and great expression.

WAAAAAA! I CRIEEED! OMG. I was half-expcting you'd break up Sasuke and his girlfriend, but that would be cliche and all and OMG. THE FEELS! D: HAHA you're awsm.

As much as I love sakura, she didn't deserve happiness. She made sasuke wait those many years. Hell she basically said she waited for ten yrs one more wouldn't hurt. She broke sasuke's heart yet she has the nerve to be bitter and ask him "For what? Getting engaged and moving on with your life?" and cry. He'd been dreaming of her and her green eyes for years and years and years.

uuuuuuuggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhh!

you just made my heart bleed with this fic! I DON'T WANT THIS TO HAPPEEEEEEEENNN! *wails like a spoiled child* .

beautifully written but I have to say that I don't like the ending... curse you Hiroko! Argh! Argh! Argh!

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