Hi, did you know that if no one criticizes your cooking at the table it means everyone is too busy eating to say a word? It is the same with writing!

You should be heaps proud you have so many faves and alerts, the lack of reviews only means you’re doing a terrific job! Why review only to say ‘Hey! Good work!’

Well I’m doing so! And adding ‘KEEP UP WITH THE GOOD WORK!’ and ‘UPDATE SOON!’

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i really hope you update soon. this is such a great story and very well written. i like how piral is a major character in the story since all we learned about her in the movie was that she is one of the best hunters.

i can't wait until tsu'tey finally allows the clan to see him. pleaaaase update soon. adding this story to my favorites :)

I like this please update? Thanks o fave story and following yay.

i like this point of view, i figured sooner or later piral and neytiri will have words, and jake also. keep it up i look forward to the next chapter!

I really love thi fan fiction, I think it's written brilliantly, so why have you not updated since february? I really really hope that you will keep on writing this story or at least communicate that you have lost interest in it, don't keep everybody on their toes like this, please?

I found the confrontation between Neytiri and Tsu'Tey amazing, I had been really looking forward to it. Guilty Neytiri was very in character, and also reading about Tsu'Tey being truly in love with her, well...I had actually never thought abot it :D

really enjoyed reading tsu'tey's pov :)

YAY! he's awake!

This was probably one of the best opening chapters I've ever read. I love the way you entered in the mind of Piral, and shown how the Na'Vi might think of Jake. Keep up the good work :)

I urge you to update! This is a good story. I really like it, and I want to read more! Thanks!

I have enjoyed this story up to this point. I would like to know how Tsu'tey would recognize the picture of Trudy Chacon? While I know he attended Grace's school, according to the actual script, and the fact he can speak English, he cannot write it so the question is could he read written English? Surely he would not have recognized the picture of Trudy.

I'm really enjoying your fic, your character is interesting and intriguing. Your story structure is clear and concise, something i absolutely adore when reading a fic, i don't have to muddle through bad grammar and tenses to find the plot. Keep up the awesome work and i look forward to reading more

Really, truly amazing. I love seeing this side of the story, and the na'vi thoughts. hope to see an update soon.

where'd you go?, i miss you so, seems like its been forever that you've been gone... Now I know I haven't reviewed before, and I'm sorry, but I promise I'll review from now until you finish if you'd just update...please? It's been two months!

I have read all seven chapters and I absolutely love this story! I noticed you have not updated anytime soon and I hope you have not given up on this story. Please continue to write and update!