 pappflora 7/21/11 . chapter 1What a sly dog she is.. x,D |
 els1324 7/2/11 . chapter 1Hahahaha, you go Winry! She's a sneaky one, that one.
Very nice! :) |
 rultas 3/31/10 . chapter 1XD Sneaky Winry...This is brilliant. Wonderfully written, and plain awesome. _ Great job, by the way. |
 BornOnTheBreakOfDawn 1/18/10 . chapter 1omg...this is brilliant! XD
i actually applauded for you after reading the story. bravo...XD
winry being manipulative...and ed assuming he's being creative...that's not a rare occurence...in fact, i can picture the entire thing well in my brain...
wonderful story!
i enjoyed it! :D
side note: i'm confused though, is this story incomplete? i mean, it's in the "in-progress" section...is there something like a follow-up story after this? well, i won't mind if you make one, but this story can stand in itself pretty well. |
 Poisoned Scarlet 1/17/10 . chapter 1This was such a cute one-shot XD
Keep it up! |
 Keiyou 1/12/10 . chapter 1Oh my gosh, This is wonderfully written! Loved how Ed's perspective on their situation suddenly changed.
Lol, Winry... how clever XD
Look forward to future fics! 3 |
 yoporock 1/11/10 . chapter 1 Hey, I saw this in LJ. I LOVE this story, if I had an account I would fave it.
I guess the part I liked the most was when Ed realized how cold she was after he calmed down.
And the end just killed me xDD, That's right Winry better never let Edward know she was the masted mind mwhaha.
Awesome story, you have a great style. |
 Orange Singer 1/11/10 . chapter 1I read this on LJ! I love it! |
 TheoreticallyEva 1/11/10 . chapter 1This was a purely delightful story. I adored every word of it. But the story itself would not have been much without your style! I absolutely LOVE it when I can find someone who does limited third person narrative as spot-on and capably as you did here. You gave Ed a wonderful voice. Your own voice is pretty awesome, too. :D
So well done! I commend you highly. :D Thank you so much for sharing! I'm downright inspired. :D |
 HoliMoliCow 1/11/10 . chapter 1Loved it! x3 |
 Ris Fallon 1/11/10 . chapter 1Snk, I can't really think of a part where I WASN'T giggling/snickering. The second I saw "this was not his idea!" in big, bold, capitalized letters, I was like "...they're gonna get in the nude for warmth, aren't they?"
It's like, the ultimate plot device. And it works, every single time. Especially when the writer has a sense of humor.
Awesome write. :] |