Omg this is so cute. I love the Brady Bunch :)

I really liked this story it had a nice twist. Great Job!

good idea but just a little thing the truth is that all the girls are a year younger then each of the boys so you may want to note that and the story is bit on short side but overall good job

the story is okay. But the ages of the kids are wrong. The kids were older when Greg got the attic room. The Bradys don't have a basement. The house is not built to have a basement. Phoebe was only a publicity thing when the Brady Bunch had a marathon on Nick At Nite and was airing on that network. Marcia was calling Mike "Dad" almost since the beginning of the show. You mispelled Marcia's name. it is spelled Marcia.

so cute

cute, but your summary was way too confusing. in the future, try to make it more clear to readers.