Great Story!

Hello, pygmymuse! I have been loving your stories for a while - I think you are a wonderful writer! Michael & Jada just leap off the page!

But...What did they name the baby? You never said...How about "Michael" or "Vaughn"? Love how the wicked brother's name was Julian (Sark?)

I was hoping Tom & Julian would have a sword fight like in an Errol Flynn movie...hm, Tom as Robin Hood? That would be interesting...

I loved this story, kind of a cross between "HawthoRNe" & "Braveheart"?

Very well done...

All my best JANET COOPER

Aw its finish, i can't believe it. Hope u do a sequel.

That would have been a very good ending...but you did not name the baby! I agree with Christina, they should have named him Mark.

This was a really good story. I can't wait for the summer for the second season to come out. I think this could keep going but this was the perfect place to end good job:)

I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT:)

Again another great chapter. That was a very cool plan they came up with. I am excited for the next chapter.

Oohh, the story is getting better.

I wonder if Julian tried to kill Tom.

Another great chapter and there are just too many suspects right now to know who tried to kill them. It is kinda frustrating. :)

Nice, the intrigue is growing.

OH another new chapter YAY. I am starting to think that it was Silas because he was so close to the king and the others. But i will have to wait and see. I can't wait for tomorrow's update. Good job

Marcus seems like a nice guy. I wonder if when Tom wakes up he'll remember everything. What will Marcus think when he realize Tom's married to Christina.

OMG I can't wait to see what happens. I can't wait untill he gets his memory back. I am excited to see what happens next. Good job

wow another great chapter i am just waiting for someone to recognise him. I can't wait for the next chapre. :)