holy crap... hope dear Edward is not in too much trouble.. lol

love this :) do u watch NCIS? Because I kinda get the feeling that Carlisle is kind of based off of Gibbs...let me know if I'm wrong.

Definitely continue. Great story. Good luck on the contest.

Hey love defenately more fucking lemons honey!

I llove it, please keep it going!

Love, Tina

ooh, i was just hoping that bella was gonna turn the tables when she touched his gun. i thought she was purposely going for it. i love a maniplulative bella in a one shot. i def think you should add a couple chapters and let us know if bella's in on the crime or not!

love this:) add more please!

poor Edie

does this story has a 2nd chapter?

so i really think you should turn this into a few shot story, it's good!

Oh, so good. More, please!

Delicious! Of course I want to know what happens!

Loved it! awesome job! I would love to read more!

This story was really awesome. I love the humor sprinkled in with the sexual attraction. Good luck in the contest. I would love for you to continue this story to see if they catch Black and whether Edward gets caught being amorous with Bella. Thanks for a great story.

More please!

Absolutly make this longer(more chapters) great plot line and well yes hooked on . Nah really, Jake the bad guy and Q' on how he was introduced to Bellas father and has Bellas father been notified of her situation hey... is he even involved, nah, just food for thought.

Loking forward to more I hope.

yes... i definitely think you should continue with the story.. cuz damn..NCISward is HOT! lol