I loved this story! please continue :)

yeah, you can't stop it there! we have to find out what happens! (and I hope bella is innocent, too)

please please keep this going... it is hot, heavy and dangerous - whats not to love : )

Please continue this. Don't leave us hanging!

Love love LOVE your stories. This could turn into a great long story so you should definitely keep it up! Maybe think of turning it in more than a three shot? It has amazing potential and think of what you could do with characterization!

Amazing! Great work. I'm definitely a fan. Keep it up :) hope to see a follow up soon!

Um- I am jumping up and down like a fat kid in a candy store for you to turn this one-shot into a a longer story, preferably longer than 2-3 chapters! And I can say that fat kid joke 'cos I was in fact that kid! So, anywho...PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE. Now if that didn't just tip you off as to how I found this one-shot: I loved it!

wow this is such a great one shot! please turn it into more! i love your edward! great job! :)

Yes! Please ma'am I'd like some more! lol. I agree. NCISward is hot!

That was amazing! Seriously, I think you should turn this into a story. I'm for sure adding you to alert, best oneshot I've read in a long write more :)

i would very much like to know what happens after this please

Please write more! It was getting so good and the storyline is pretty awesome! I want to see what happens...

Wow, what a good story. I love the show NCIS, but man this tops that any day. I do hope you continue with it a bit, and great job!

Great idea! Would definitely like to see more.

ohh yea

that you need to turn into a two or three or a multichapter

i really hope bella is innocent in all of this

that was an awesome first chapter!

More more more! Please...