 agdhdudhj 5/26/12 . chapter 8 please update ! It's a great story |
 Mrs. Rilla Ford 5/11/12 . chapter 8Please finish this story. I was extremely annoyed/disappointed to find that you stopped updating JUST BEFORE the major point of the story happened. C' mon, please? For the fans? :) |
 Santoka 5/7/12 . chapter 8Oh, please, please continue. This is good in every meaning of the word and I suspect the next chapter's going to be my favourite :D |
 Rouxmans 4/22/12 . chapter 8This is really a great story. At first I thought it wasn't going to but boy am I hooked. Please update soon.
My heart just goes out to Pepper the poor girl.
P.s. Is Tony going to click when Rhodey talked about chat rooms?
Keep it up. |
 Elelith 3/31/12 . chapter 8Just started on the Iron Man fics and this one is really good...You have the whole characterisation and dual identity down to a T. Hope you update! |
 angel-death-dealer 3/6/12 . chapter 8This is absolutely amazing! I'll be late for work for how long it's taken me to read these but dear god, how utterly perfect is this story? I love it! Your characterisation for a situation which could never be included in either the comics or films is brilliant, the way that both the characters are growing in ever paragraph is so spot on - it's not too fast and it's not dragged out, it's perfectly their speed. They're both learning lessons that they need to learn, and the conversations between Fanny and Turbo are exactly the kind of conversations that they need to have, and the slips about her calling him Tony are just brilliant, it shows how Pepper really does view all men as an offset/comparison to Tony, whether its intentional or not.
Congratulations on a story very well done (though hopefully not completed) I think this is absolutely amazing and can't wait to read the rest :)
Much love! x |
 salanderB 2/12/12 . chapter 8This is absolutely brilliant. Your characterizations are so very wonderful! And the humor is so good. I LOLed hard so many times.
I'll be waiting for more, of course. |
 ilyena damodred 1/28/12 . chapter 8oh, wow. GREAT story. Brilliantly written, even if slowly. Thank you for writing and sharing. |
 BoysInBooksAreAlotBetter 1/7/12 . chapter 8He'd frame the letter, that is so damn sweet! Really loving this, update soon! :) |
 Kit4 1/7/12 . chapter 8I can't tell you how happy I am that you've continued this story. I've kept it on my favorites list for ages and keep checking to see if you've updated. This story rocks! The characterizations are just amazing and your writing style superb. Please keep writing and I'll keep watching and waiting anxiously for more! :) |
 HeartoSteel 12/26/11 . chapter 8I had to re-read this great story from the beginning because I didn't remember all the details. So complicated and real. I love this damn story lol. Keep it up and I'm looking forward to an update asap. |
 scubagurl22 12/19/11 . chapter 8Yikes, what a letter! And does he know that Pepper has figured out he's maybe Turbo? Rodey mentioned chat rooms but I couldn't tell... |
 angsty 12/18/11 . chapter 8I'm so glad you're continuing this story! What a fantastic letter! I hope we'll see the next chapter before Christmas! |
 XxThe Penny TreasurexX 12/18/11 . chapter 8Wow this chapter was so good! I'm glad we got to see what the letter said. I just really hope Tony and Pepper talk soon:-) Please update soon! |
 serenitysea 12/18/11 . chapter 8FANTASTIC UPDATE.
These two are like a trainwreeck of emotion and misrerad signals and you can't help but root for them to just GET IT RIGHT for once. So true to character, and brilliantly well written. Can't wait to see how Tony handles things from here... |