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| Reviews for Onyxia Halves |
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   PrincessOfTheNight01 2/14/13 . chapter 2That was very interesting so far please do much more in the future (and fast please). Please update soon! |
| Nero10102 11/25/12 . chapter 2 Please don't let that bastard snake-pedo get him and update soon you story rocks so far! Nero out! |
| The Lone Rurouni 5/13/12 . chapter 2 A very interesting story so far. Any updates planned? |
| omally-dood 12/16/10 . chapter 2 wow this is cool what will happen 2 naruto will he become an experiment or will he become a mini orochimaru (in abilities) |
| RasenShuriken92 6/30/10 . chapter 2 its great! :D please udpate soon! :D |
| Ignisha 3/10/10 . chapter 2 Huu... This one seems interesting... UPDATE! Ciaossu |
| Guest 1/22/10 . chapter 2 wow i always wanted to read a story with this parring please update soon this is really good. |
| the shadow overlord279 1/19/10 . chapter 2 Aw the snake pedophile ruins everybodies day! Poor Naruto, Orochimaru is gonna try to show him his 'snake'. i feel sorry for him. |
| OverLordRevan 1/15/10 . chapter 2 not bad but you kinda just jumped right in there with no information on his necklace |
| god of all 1/12/10 . chapter 2 Great chapter and story so fair pleases continue the story soon. |
| Aaron Leach 1/12/10 . chapter 2 Awesome story. |
| Toa Naruto 1/12/10 . chapter 2 Dude, the concept is poretty cool...But you need to spend more time proofreading your work. There are still parts in the prologue that talk about Ageha instead of Tsurara. Additionally, you use the wrong words(Threw when you should have used through), and misspelled the character's names (Tsurarara when it should be Tsurara). Plus the wording was a bit awkward in both chapters. Other than that, it was pretty good. |
