Ya know, it might just be me but I don't think people who don't write can have such harsh opinions. I hope you read this, Cadmuse.

Given the summary, which was an appropriate disclaimer, I had thought this might be readable. Almost. But it *was*, finally, too self-conscious. And the review thank-yous made me wince. Be sincere, Morbane.

Intruiging. very very interesting. Interestingly enough, my version of the team rocket takeover (as yet unwritten) also had them ruling Kanto.
However, i had the league remanents in the orange islands. Well, anyway, great fic. love the way duplika used ditto. And you portrayed May awsomely.
May Rules! And so does Misty! 10/10

Short but simple-ish. Very original idea on Ditto hiding, and I'd say this is PG13 for language.

Coolz. Pika's learning to read/write, how cute! What *was* Gary doing there? And did you write that poem? It's cute!

This is great.. But confusing, it jumps around so fast! (BTW, in real Pokeland, Kanto and Johto are two seperate places.) Wouldn't Misty be *dead* if she was shot in the chest?

Great story! I'll have to read the rest of it later, but I really think it is getting good, if a little confusing.

nice!
It isn't that bad!
It's cool!
IT'S AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!:P

I can't believe I'm about to say this... *deeply inhales* I really like Gary and Ash. I don't usually like stuff with both of them in the same place, or solo, for that matter. So you know you're doing the right thing, here! I like the last comment from Gary. AND IF YOU DON'T KEEP THIS UP I'LL SEND MY....my....MY POSSESSED HUMAN-HATING HUMAN GIRL OUT TO GET YOU!! That makes no sense, does it? I'll have to explain later. Bye, for now!

Certainly did take me time to catch up with this. *lol* And it's another chapter that I enjoyed. I won't even be obvious and coo about a certain someone's minimal appearance. I have a job! I just wanted to mention that. Uh, but I shouldn't. A fab chapter, that's for sure. Well, how long am I going to be waiting for more, hrm? *grin*

Sweet! Pikachu's learning how to write! And Gary is training hard, I see...but what about Professor Oak? He needs to get out of Kanto! Do May and Ash and Gary have to leave permanently as well? ...Well, probably. WHADDYA MEAN RITCHIE'S PART OF TEAM ROCKET!?!

Interesting... I wonder what will happen next. Well, keep on writing this, or I'll never find out!

I really like this story. I would like to read more...

I'm really curious, I just have to know what else is going on in this -- yeah, it's that gripping. That and I'm shallow and wondering if Richie will be in it more... Richie, Ritchie, Hiroshi, it's all the same in the end... uh. Yeah. ^^ Write more, I need to know what's going to happen.

Awesome as usual, Morbane! Love your style!