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| Lobo Kendo 2003-01-31 ch 1,  | abuseYa know, it might just be me but I don't think people who don't write can have such harsh opinions. I hope you read this, Cadmuse. |
| Cadmuse 2002-12-08 ch 1, | abuseGiven the summary, which was an appropriate disclaimer, I had thought this might be readable. Almost. But it *was*, finally, too self-conscious. And the review thank-yous made me wince. Be sincere, Morbane. |
| GameGuardian2x (toolazy to ... 2002-11-26 ch 3, anon. | abuseIntruiging. very very interesting. Interestingly enough, my version of the team rocket takeover (as yet unwritten) also had them ruling Kanto. However, i had the league remanents in the orange islands. Well, anyway, great fic. love the way duplika used ditto. And you portrayed May awsomely. May Rules! And so does Misty! 10/10 |
| Miss Black Dragon 2002-05-31 ch 3, | abuseShort but simple-ish. Very original idea on Ditto hiding, and I'd say this is PG13 for language. |
| Miss Black Dragon 2002-05-31 ch 2, | abuseCoolz. Pika's learning to read/write, how cute! What *was* Gary doing there? And did you write that poem? It's cute! |
| Miss Black Dragon 2002-05-31 ch 1, | abuseThis is great.. But confusing, it jumps around so fast! (BTW, in real Pokeland, Kanto and Johto are two seperate places.) Wouldn't Misty be *dead* if she was shot in the chest? |
| Starlight the Wanderer 2002-05-29 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! I'll have to read the rest of it later, but I really think it is getting good, if a little confusing. |
| wakka 2002-05-26 ch 3, | abusenice! It isn't that bad! It's cool! IT'S AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!:P |
| Lightning-Strike 2002-05-20 ch 3, | abuseI can't believe I'm about to say this... *deeply inhales* I really like Gary and Ash. I don't usually like stuff with both of them in the same place, or solo, for that matter. So you know you're doing the right thing, here! I like the last comment from Gary. AND IF YOU DON'T KEEP THIS UP I'LL SEND MY....my....MY POSSESSED HUMAN-HATING HUMAN GIRL OUT TO GET YOU!! That makes no sense, does it? I'll have to explain later. Bye, for now! |
| dana-chan 2002-05-08 ch 2, | abuseCertainly did take me time to catch up with this. *lol* And it's another chapter that I enjoyed. I won't even be obvious and coo about a certain someone's minimal appearance. I have a job! I just wanted to mention that. Uh, but I shouldn't. A fab chapter, that's for sure. Well, how long am I going to be waiting for more, hrm? *grin* |
| Lightning-Strike 2002-03-31 ch 2, | abuseSweet! Pikachu's learning how to write! And Gary is training hard, I see...but what about Professor Oak? He needs to get out of Kanto! Do May and Ash and Gary have to leave permanently as well? ...Well, probably. WHADDYA MEAN RITCHIE'S PART OF TEAM ROCKET!?! |
| Ara Moon 2002-03-31 ch 2, | abuseInteresting... I wonder what will happen next. Well, keep on writing this, or I'll never find out! |
| Frontovik 2002-03-31 ch 2, | abuseI really like this story. I would like to read more... |
| dana-chan 2002-03-01 ch 1, | abuseI'm really curious, I just have to know what else is going on in this -- yeah, it's that gripping. That and I'm shallow and wondering if Richie will be in it more... Richie, Ritchie, Hiroshi, it's all the same in the end... uh. Yeah. ^^ Write more, I need to know what's going to happen. |
| Violation 2002-02-22 ch 1, | abuseAwesome as usual, Morbane! Love your style! |