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Squibakou 9/23/07 . chapter 3
i think I'll just review here anyway, especially since you haven't updated in 4 years...

Well, i loved it while it lasted, thanks for the chapters you had, it's been a laugh.
the2weirdo 8/2/07 . chapter 3
That was the most amazingly wonderfully amazing, wonderful story I have read in a long, long, long, long, long, long, long (etc) time!
Little Lilac Lady 3/8/06 . chapter 2
You should add lily and have Sirius/Lily and sirius doesn't want to because it's his best mates girl. ANd Lily/Snape and to get revenge on james snape goes along with it and james is like furious while waiting to go into the story!
Letter 2/19/06 . chapter 2
In the paper airplane letter, it says "P.S.S" but, properly, its P.P.S because P.S is post script and it wouldn't be post script script, it would be post post script - as in, the post script after the post script.
Lethe Seraph 3/23/04 . chapter 1
Yes! You are now on my favorites...
Sinical-Sarchasm 3/22/04 . chapter 3
i know you said don't review here but i need to put you on author alert. sorry.
Sinical-Sarchasm 3/22/04 . chapter 2
*g* I love the world - great description. Heh. Do some twincest...please...*puppy eyes*
Sinical-Sarchasm 3/22/04 . chapter 1
This has to be some wonder of the world stylistically. Lol...I don't know why, but somehow this style captures the mst3k type tone of this fic perfectly, far better than similar fics I've read. Anyway, great job - oh, and thanks for reading/reviewing odi et amo. I should have the next bit up fairly soon, although since I've taken up trying to write in an amalgamation of Virginia Woolf and Hemmingway's styles (don't ask, it's possible) writing is taking me waay longer (but it's way better too) and so it might take a little while.
vashjinn 2/11/04 . chapter 1
Very interesting... I will be waiting to see if you really do write more but I think I'm getting ahead of myself!
Creature of the night 2/9/04 . chapter 2
Are you gonne update? *sniffles* This is actually really funny! :-D I'd like to see what happens when Draco from the fanfiction finds out what happened with real Draco to fanfiction Harry... does that make sense?
Aslyn 12/5/03 . chapter 3
I usually strongly dislike SLASH but somehow, it's really taking to me. Maybe it's these stories so good in detail and understanding that I amkes me adore it now. Anyways, so I don't go off in a boring and tiring speech, great job and hope you update soon.
Sincerely,
P.J
P.S (I know how hard school is and the pressure of writing these forever long FF. Especially with my A.P teachers breathign down my neck..*shudder*)
Chess 5/19/03 . chapter 2
AHem *cough* Snape/Lucius *cough* Please please please?
LadyCulebra 2/27/03 . chapter 1
I think you /do/ need to add Lucius and Riddle. You should do some femmeslash too. Can't just ignore half of the spectrum. You could add in Blaise (personally I see him as male, but that's just me) and Seamus and Oliver and Flint too! Yay! This is fun!
Dark Magician Girl 10/30/02 . chapter 3
more,more,more,more,more,more!
Erilys 10/6/02 . chapter 2
That story was almost completely indecipherable. Due to the lack of coherency, I stopped about three paragraphs into the second chapter.

The idea isn't bad, but I personally think it's been drawn across too broad a scope. To improve, you might try focusing on one specific pairing or a specific situations, and deal with them in depth rather.

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