I thought this was lovely! I cried of course, but I still think it is a nice story. Great Job and I can't wait until you post the new story!

Wonderful! Sad, but awesome(as in awe inspiring)! Their grandchildren are so cute! Little children, always are it seems.

I loved this one-shot, even if it was terribly depressing. :)

Ranger

I was crying by the end of this story, almost hard enough to not be able to type this review! Very well done, utterly heart wrenching!