finish yer facking fic.

Please continue this. Please please please continue this.

Very interesting beginning; I admire a lot your brilliant writing skills! :)

Hi sorry I have come to this story so late in the day...

wow I absolutely loved it!

great story telling... loved your changes from the original story... particulalry Edward's responses to Bella's

I got completely caught up in their journey... great job!

LOL found the engagement party chapter so funny...

I loved your telling of Edward's special time yearly from the morning of Bella's birth... lovely touch :o)

So much more I wanted to follow with the story now that Bella is changed... but I quite understand the place you have ended their HEA :o)

This story is really good! I wish you'd continue with it!

Such an intense beginning. I'm looking forward to the rest. Great start.

I have a confession. I haven't read Atlas Shrugged, which makes me like the only person in the fandom. But I'm terrified of your story, and I honestly don't know why because I've read plenty of heartfail stories without freaking out. Something about your subject matter resonated with me and I have a feeling it will be the heartfail of all heartfails. I don't know why I felt the need to confess this except that I don't want you to wonder why you've never seen a single review from me for that story. One day I hope to have the balls to read it. I loved Red Masque, so I jumped all over this new story when I saw it. I can't help but wonder if there's some sort of incest thing going on with Edward's parents, it was the only thing I could think of when it came to the blood traitor line. Perhaps they were disappointed that the twins weren't more like them? At any rate, Edward is all sorts of messed up from the horror he has experienced. I wonder if there was any indication leading up to this moment for them?

Thanks for writing and sharing!

Excellent!

Yippy! Happy dance for me!

well. this sounds interesting so far.

..that sounds weird, considering how violent this chapter was :/

ive never read anything of yours before so yay!

lol :))

jenn

Ew. This was creepy, sick, and sad. However, I will read the next chapter...as soon as you update! I think this will be a very intense story, and I can't wait to see how Edward and Bella are together. Don't leave us hanging!

Wow, I loved a line, hang on I'll find it and come back,

'while their feet shuffled across the floor, audibly lifting from the sticky mess below.' I could actually hear it! (I don't mean literally, just in case you were thinking I was a bit of a fruit).

x x

I really want to say this is beautiful... but that's totally the wrong word considering the circumstances that is in the story. Nevertheless, it's very fantastic to read, and your writing makes it almost seem poetic. The detail of him running next door, along with the last communication between the twins is amazing.

I've noticed though that you haven't updated for around two moths and a half. I hope that it isn't abandoned and I hope that this will be updated soon. Your stories are always fantastic.

You really know how to write suspense. Chilling start. Hope you update soon!

Yes! Another story! I don't know why, but I love these slightly more psychological horror story. I'm beyond curious as to how this will progress. When I read that it was Alice that was killed, I swear I gasped. And the scene with Edward contemplating the blood that he felt was his... That was powerful.

Thank you so much for writing this!